This is quite well written. An interesting vignette with just enough hints of the disturbance seething within Togusa to make the ending, while a surprise, an understandable one. Nicely done.

Interesting idea you have here... you captured Batou and Togusa's thoughts/memories very well.

Also, (and if you choose to delete this review, that's fine, I'll understand) New Moon-san showed me what you wrote to her while replying about my review. I would appreciate it if wouldn't use bad language when writing to her. I know you probably didn't mean anything by it, but I think it bothered her, though she wouldn't say. And please don't reply to her about this; she doesn't know I'm writing to you about that.

Please don't take this the wrong way, Shadow-san.

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Spooky and nice...

Did Togusa kill himself? And if so, why?

Beatifully written like all of the ones of yours I like...

Wonderful!

- New Moon Werewolf

Awesome one-shot. Can't wait to read more! ;)

That was cute. I really liked the corpse comment at the end. You always have a way with words. Look forward to reading more of your work:)

-Kitomi

Interesting...

...I'm a git?

Thank you! _

Nice piece - AU's fun, isn't it? You get a real sense of things falling apart, slowly but surely. Hopefully the end of S will give a little bit of light again...