what do you mean not worth continuing!?!?! I absolutely love this story; it's the best one i've read in a while. I especially enjoy the way you write Sai. somehow he usually annoys me in fanfics but in this story, he's become one of my favorite characters.

and oh my god, shino. i could not stop laughing at his (twice) horrendous timing.

and of course, naruto and sasuke. everyone has a slightly different take on this pairing, i think, but it really irritates me when authors automatically make them have distinct dominant/submissive positions. but i love the way you write them...unsure but always with so much tension and raw emotion and neither of them willing to back down. and yes, i did go to aff to read the full version :D

anyways, you are an awesome writer--plot, characterization, humor, non cliche-ness...you rock! i hope we get an update from you soon!

This story rocks! I absolutely love it. I can't wait for the next chapter!! It kept me interested the whole time, which for me and my bird-brainness, that's an impressive feat. Seriously, it is awesome and well developed.

Great story. Sai was hilarious. Can't wait to find out if the Hokage is going to kill them.

Wow. Just had sex on the Hokage's office.

You can end it here. Just make this say completed or something.

Shino is a funny victim. Very bad timing.

Naruto is just on top as Sasuke (sex). I like that fact because it gets so annoying to have aways Sasuke on top.

It must suck to be caught having sex by one of your friend or family member.

Humorous.

Yes, Naruto don't immobilize people in WATER.

He is really clever(Naruto) but it seems that he is most clever when it involves Sasuke.

Hey Animeaddict6 kiss kiss

my response to this story is very simple

WOW!ect ect...
this story is now officialy in my favorites

[squeal] i just read the full version on A.F.F

you are a fantastic writer seriously

the only major flaw in this story is that the storyline is eratic with out the smoothness of some of your other works.
It some times seems like your story is a bunch of differently themed storys[with different plots] are glued together.

And personaly i would have put in some more information about subatomic jutsus and their possible aplication.

but all in all i love this story far to much to criticize it

great job!

May the darkness Protect you and the light Bless you

May hope step with you

and may peace be your companion

your friend Belle M

I read this AWESOME story of yours on AFF so don't forget to update there too.
d.k.-chan

Freakin Luved This Storii!! So0o Awesome. Just Read It From Start 2 Finish. Luved Your Writing Style and How You Presented Sasuke's Character - Realistic. And The Humour You Added With Sai And Sasuke's Trousers Catching Fire - Tuu Jokes.

Definitelii A New Fav Storii =]

that was so awesome i read it twice! plz continue it!

That was so hot!!
Hehe, I feel like a pervert;p

Team dynamics is an amazinf fanfic! I couldn't stop reading it, I'm so happy your still updating!

it was really good!
=)