Ha Ha! Loved it! I hope you write more.

Lynn

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loved this story, Love the idea of a wedding reception with meat or veggie lasagne (no expense spared) LOL hope you are continuing as bugme wants revenge?

I alway's hated the bugme character, what has he got against Harm can't wait for next instalment.

great story.

I like how you combined Stargate and JAG together!

This was very good!

Looking forward to more!

Are you going to continue this, because its really cool.

great story.

Never did like the character Brumby,hate him now!who would want too set up Harm, could Palmer be the aggressor, love the intrigue update ASAP.

Please continue! I want know how Stargate SG1 is involved!

Good Job! Looking forward to more!

Brilliant! Can't wait for more. Please update soon.

Love,

Lynn

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this soungs like a good story keep it up

great story.

good opening for an interesting story. i read the family series, and while it seemed a bit far-fetched to me at times, for the most part, it was well-written. i enjoyed this chapter, and hope you continue it. one thing did bug me, though. when mac found harm in his apartment, you wrote that he was wearing his navy whites, and when harm was recounting what happened, he said he had just returned from a jog. that didn't make sense to me, unless for some wild reason he'd wear his whites to go jogging. other than that, though, great! i can't wait to read more!

Great beginning, can't wait to read more.

You mentioned this is part of the family series, where can I find that?

Sophie

What a brilliant first chapter you have my full attention the plot thickens and i can't wait for next chapter as soon as please