Wow! This story was really good!

Wow, you're a very talented writer. This fic was amazing from start to end. I love the way you put their friendship, it was very cute. Reelly loved this.

Very enjoy ^^

finnished! home sick... made me feel better :) can i marry jack? SHUT UP! god i hate my inner voice.
tehe, no no more sequals i beg of you

totally awesome!

the only part i'm not that comfortable with is the last chapter, where you describe how they look in the future. i imagined them really ugly. o.0 (and like motorcycle dudes 6.6)

Anyways, i have a question. during chapter 4, jack's dead. so i get where you were going with the commentary thing. But what i don't get is HOW YOU DIED! just wondering.

Then, in chapter 5, you're both still dead. i get that, it makes a lot of sense. (duh)
but again, what i don't get is at the end of the chappie, jack's alive. and again, i get that. it's not that hard to follow. but, again, WHY ARE YOU ALIVE? just wondering.

sorry if i've wasted your time, or if i've confusd you. bye.

Is this a rip-off of lilviorX's "Bring Me To Life"? It really seems that way to me...

Yaoi?

You made me cry dammit! Good fic, though.

Cool story. Always figured Jacks nature would be electrical. Nice work.:)

please make a sequil. its ust to good to end here. and i would like you to message me to answer this question...do you or do you not support the JackXClay pairing because that is what you fic implies? thankyou

Man hug?!

Excuse me, I am female and I sometimes do that with my friends... only we don't do the back patting.

waitasecond! 'the adventure just around the corner...'? hm...that sounds like a cliffy foreshadowing of a sequel...hm...SQUEE! i loved this..oh and when i saw my screenname i was like 'wha-huh?' you won't believe how many times i think someone has the exact same screenname as me >.< this was realy good and i wuvved it to death...no pun intended jack...actually that wasn't really much of a pun at all..eh heh heh..SEQUEL!

Part 2. we need more. MORE MAN HUGS. This was a great story. wonderful, i can wait to see what you write next

I think my brain is broken. I keyboard-smash in your general direction! XD

Dude, you killed -Jack- off. That's as Brokeback as you can get. That's like, two thirds of the identifying thingumys: Guy who is a Cowboy. Guy named Jack. Jack is killed because he cares for the cowboy. Cowboy angsts. All that's missing is the gay! And we have magic, so death isn't permanent, apparently.

Good on you for inserting limitations - when Chase comes back to finish him off again, they can't keep reviving ad lib.

There SHOULD be a sequel.

Absolutely NO Brokeback Mountain. God NO.

We agreed. Jack and Clay both like GIRLS.

Thanx for the little comments, BTW. Somehow, in two lines, you got me perfectly.