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| Dream Ablaze 2008-06-28 ch 3,  | abuseLooks good so far! :3 I love the way you portray the characters and I can't wait to see what happens next. By the way, you know so much about Japanese culture! Do you live in Japan or something? I know nothing. xD I kept going to the footnotes. I didn't know anything about the whole albino thing; it's really interesting. :3 Anyway, please update soon! |
| n/a 2008-05-26 ch 3, anon. | abusehey, this is really great really pro ;] footnotes and everything i love how real your story seems they should just sell digimon to you, haha update soon |
| katy007 2008-05-25 ch 3, | abuseI love your story! update soon :) |
| anon 2008-05-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseYAY! more Ryuki love your fic keeping their relationship secret that way they can be alone more and express their love privately as it should be |
| Madara 2008-04-23 ch 2, anon. | abusehahaha as soon as I read the ringtone lyrics I knew it'd be one of Ayu's songs XD Great chapter, really funny :) |
| Madara 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abusehahaha I liked this fic XD!! Ruki is a bitch but still cool, it was really well written ^^ well done!! *thumbs up* |
| Takeru Kitty Coconut 2007-08-09 ch 2, | abuseMORe! |
| yin vs yang 2007-04-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseYin:i luv ur story! Rika's halarious! I don't really like noriko, she seems like an evil prat tht's gonna try to take ryo away from rika Can't wait to find out what happens next, please update soon! |
| shana.rose. 2007-03-19 ch 2, | abuseNoriko needs to learn that Ryo IS RUKI'S BOYFRIEND! that bitch better not try to steal him! |
| BabyDark 2006-10-07 ch 2, | abuseThat nice!..wow..is her cuzin going to like Ryo?...the fic gettin more interesting. |
| ickle kat 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abusenice! i love ryuki, u haf to continue! |
| Squit Ayumin 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseSome of the Japanese is a little off, but I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| AzNAnGeL07 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseomg i hate Noriko -_-;; such a byotch xPP lolol update plx =]] |
| ShadowFoxFolk 2006-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi. Well I haven't read it yet so i can't comment. It sounds good though. Just one thing, I noticed you use japanese in your fic... um...yeah, you should really put a translation guide at the end. Its really annoying when you don't know what they're saying because there's no translation. Hell even put the english in brackets after the japanese if you like. just explain it somewhere please. Anyway, good job on writing a fic :) its always nice to be able to be creative :) well done |
| BabyDark 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was good fic..can't wait for more chapters. |