 JustOneMoreWapaneseFanGirl 2009-11-13 . chapter 25I've been reading this story on , and I've gotta say reading it on a white background is a little odd. I've grown fond of the purple-gray.
I re-read this story once a week, flipping through the chapters reliving certain moments.
As satisfying as this is I still long for your next update. I hope your computer is brought back from the dead soon. I want to know desperately what will happen the next morning. I crave your words.
Waiting as patiently as a fan girl can (insert twitch here),
Me O.o |
 lyiint 2009-10-25 . chapter 25Congratulations! Your story, Shrine Prostitute, has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Lemon and Best Romance: Inu/Kag for the Third Quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: (Inuyasha Fan Guild dot com)
If you have any other questions, don’t hesitate to contact our moderators at (IYFG Moderator at g mail dot com). Congratulations again!
-- IYFG Beta Group – lyiint ^^ |
 BeautifulSamurai 2009-10-13 . chapter 25Oh im so sorry i didn't write this review sooner! I read"Concession" almost immediately after you updated (yes, i quite literally sqealed, dropped all i was doing, and scrolled down the page like a beaming maniac full of glee - that is, i was very happy to see another chapter on here. ^_~), but somehow time got away from me. Anyways, to put it simply - you are, as i have said before quite a precocious and exceptional writer. How you make me love Inuyasha and Kagome even more after all these years. . .it's a gift. I think the progression of S.P. is still wonderfully steady and building, and this chapter is no exception. The outing was perfect, and so real. And i feel you have added Sango and Miroku quite adeptly and lovingly in to the thickening plot. I love how Kagome introduced Inuyasha to them, and how Inuyasha laughed!Miroku and Sango's antics were adorable and as familiar and endearing as ever.
I literally held my breath and laughed at myself when i realized i had scooted to the edge of my seat - during the scene that the little boy told his father that Inuyasha was the *good* guy. The whole cop scene felt so reminiscent of real world issues that i felt all the more moved by it, and impressed with how BOTH Kagome and Inuyasha handled it. Kagome for being the ever true pillar of strength and goodness, and Inuyasha for being her big hearted protector - and for staying with her, instead of running off in a male induced fit. They feel like such 3-dimensional characters to me. I love the thought of Koga being the towns "vigilante". I can totally see that.
Yes- everything was WONDERFUl, AMAZING, BRILLIANT, i loved every second of it.
But what really brought this chapter home for me was the end - Inuyasha and Kagome's kiss(es).
Wow.
I say it again, Wow.
Inuyasha was so tender and so open - and Kagome's reaction! - the timing felt oh so perfect.
It was lovely.
And i cant WAIT to read more.
Thank you as always for making my day! =) |
 nightshadow04 2009-10-13 . chapter 25I haven't checked in on the story in awhile so I was quite surprised that I had some chapters to catch up on. I still LOVE this story and I can't wait to read the next installment! |
 Black-Kat-585 2009-09-24 . chapter 25AWE!
This is so cute!
I love it!
And whilst replying to this I slammed my head into the corner of my bed posts and it's bleeding slightly so this will have to be short.
I love this!
Please update soon?!? |
 Babsie 2009-09-11 . chapter 25WOW... This chapter took my breath away.
It's been a while since I've been following this story and I think it is fantastic.
At first I bad could wait for a new chapter, was an original idea and very well writing. I really like your style.
I'm sorry to say that in the middle of the story I lost interest ... it have became very aganst and gloomy ... moreover, Inuyasha refused to live with Kagome and then came the proposal to wait for 5 years ... 5 YEARS! Too much! I thought it was too much drama.
However, this chapter made me reread the whole story. Finally we're getting somewhere. I'm happy!
Although you do not know me, I'd like to give a suggestion. Don't you think it's time for Kagome and Inuyasha being together? Really together? Have not come the time when Inuyasha at least fight to free yourself from the temple and start a life with Kagome. I'm sure that this new life will not be easy and you will have lots to write about the difficulties of a Hanyou in a society so prejudiced. Inuyasha will have to learn to deal with the family of Kagome, accept new friends .. there are so many obstacles.
You have already written more than 350 pages, do you not think it's time to go up a step? Hope you don't get me wrong and get mad with my suggestions.
Your story is very interesting, one of the best I've ever read and one of the few I have reread.
Your style full of details in the description in each chapter holds me pluged in.
Yesterday I had a terrible day and the only good thing was to read your story and sleep with the soul relieved.
You and your story made all the difference for me.
Please do not leave this story without an end.
Congratulations and thank you. |
 AsianDelicacy 2009-09-11 . chapter 25I wasn't expecting another chapter from you so soon, but nonetheless, I was very excited to read it. As you already know, I love this story of yours, especially this chapter. I love how Inuyasha is coming out of his shell and learning acceptance and trust. I love the heroic side of him, but I also love the more humble and sensitive side of him even more, because that side of Inuyasha is hardly ever explored in fanfics. Given the circumstances and hardships surrounding his life, he had to be tough and cold. He had this tough exterior that he didn't want anyone to crack, but piece by piece, Kagome broke through his rough exterior and now I believe he's finally beginning to see his light at the end of the tunnel. I really, really loved reading this chapter. I couldn't get it off my mind after I first read it, from Inuyasha defending Kagome, to his non-verbal declaration of love, and then to their new found intimacy, this chapter was such a pleasure to read. I love your portrayal of both Inuyasha and Kagome and I'll probably never grow tired of reading this story. I can't wait to read more. Oh, I love the Sango/Miroku parts too. They're funny. Until next time...
~ASIAN*DELICACY~ |
 Kamira 2009-09-10 . chapter 25Nice mix of drama and romance, very nice. Interesting to see Kouga again, been awhile. I loved the kiss, actually said "aw" when it happened.
As always, loving your writing. |
 LordRandallsLady 2009-09-10 . chapter 25I read this chapter on Media Miner, but I like posting reviews here more. I just have to say again, how much I love this story. This latest chapter was wonderful and the ending was beautiful. After an agonizing wait of how many chapters?, InuYasha finally, FINALLY admits he cares about her. 'Bout freaking time! :D
Thank you to you and your betas for all of the hard work on this story.
Until next time... |
 cutebaby 2009-09-10 . chapter 25hey
I really loved this chapter, I cant wait for Inuyasha to find out about what Kagome is doing outside the shrine, and what about her kids that she's teaching.
I really am interested in finding out if they get to use the shrine as a safe heaven as promised and stuff like that... but i really dont want to end the inu and kag part lol... i guess i just want it all right now lol.
anyways update as soon as you can. bye! |
 SilverStarWing 2009-09-10 . chapter 25What was a very nice chapter. I was giggling like a maniac here. |
 KyriaHitomi 2009-09-10 . chapter 25I'm so glad you've started regularly updating this story again!
It was also nice to have a slightly more laid back and up beat chapter after the intensity of the last couple. And Inuyasha saving Kagome and kicking butt is always entertaining! |
 leadranach 2009-09-10 . chapter 25Don't worry about maybe missing something here and there in terms of background setting; your writing puts the reader where you WANT them to be and it's your story to tell (which by the way I'm thoroughly enjoying!) I love the way you write, and I especially loved this chapter (and how 'the kiss' just snuck up on you!) Thank you for the wonderful read! |
 HeidiBax 2009-09-10 . chapter 25Another wonderful chapter, what a great way to start an otherwise blah Thursday! I loved all of it but I especially enjoyed the part where Kagome and Inuyasha went back to the shrine and just made out lol. It was sweet. Thanks for all your hard work. Looking forward to the next chapter! ;) |
 Fantin4sun 2009-09-10 . chapter 25Two words Love It! Great chapter I have been waiting for this chapter to finally come and it just made my day. keep up the great work can't wait to read more! Kagome rules! |