You make me wanna cry

That was beautiful. Tear-jerking and smile-inducing and tragic but beautiful. You have a wonderful knack for evoking emotions with every word. Favorited :)

babe babe babe i love it its amazing i cant say anything more than that its beautiful

keep writin'.

Oh, My GOD! This is the best fic that I have ever read, really! You made me cry, author-san T.T

I cant say how this fic is really really great..you made it just right, flowing naturally, and I dont even realize that I am reading it. I felt that I was there and watching all the scenes.

But I dont understand it in the end. Why should Shinichi trade his life for Shiho's? I dont get the reason. would you please tell me?

keep writing

You made me cry! T_T

Wow...such a sad ending. :'( GREAT STORY!

That. Is. Beautiful. Breathtakingly beautiful piece. I love it.

You just killed me.

So badly.

Oh my God, I'm so crying for Shiho.

And I absolutely loved the scene in the third world apartment. It was so beautiful it broke my heart. v.v

Please write more. This fandom needs more Shiho/Shinichi! !

i can never have enough praise for this little piece of heaven that you wrote. being a shiho/shinichi fan for sometime now, i've read my fair share of tragedya and angst. but somehow this piece just top off all the rest.

and i'm not being sarcastic when i say that the child is a very lucky soul.

The ending is weird. Someone donated blood to him, he wouldn't want that, so Shiho killed him?

O.o -breathes out- Oh my...god... -wipes away tears- That was SO sad!

IT WAS SO TOUCHING! OMG I'm crying over your fics oh noes I can't stop T_T... your fics are so powerful and looks so real that I..I.. well you know what I might say but really it's too good I tell too good!

It is so nicely written, you're a great writer and this story is so touching it made me cry! But, I still don't get why Shiho had to kill Shinichi. Pls explain to me, okay?

that was wonderfully written...and very sad in the end. great job!

I have nothing to say, other than this is one of the best one-shot's I've read in DC fandom. I am currently in awe.