LoL this story is truly amazing i loved it, you're a really good writer if i may say so and i hope to read more of you work someday take care! and may you have the best of luck

it was funny and i like it but can you put a story for them that yzak turned into a girl again and get so many suitors. can you put that yzak is forced to sing lacus clyne song in the front of the public?and athrun is about to marry cagalli?

"Miguel and Rusty started strip dancing, Athrun ended up making out with Nicol and Dearka woke up finding Yzak in his bed, both of them completely naked…"

Naughty Naughty Author. That was very bold to say =P Athrun and Nicol... disgrace, but it was funny.

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So like... is Yzak gay? IDK Werid ass situation, but it's funny as hell!! I don't like yaoi and all, I'm agaist it, and I didn't realize if this was was or not, but if it is, it's actaully really good, probley just becasue there is no hard core grinding, then... I'd be uncontroble. Know what I mean? Boy that's a mouth full.

Heh, heh, I could imagine this happening:

"Shove it up your ASS DEARKA!" Yzak yelled, obvoiously very uncontroble with the situation.
"Only if your around!"
o gayness XD

My god!! I WANT A PICTURE!! gah! Even if its fan made! Well, I did draw AND post a picture of Yzaks (OC) Sister, Lorielle. Maybe she is the Girl Version of Yzak. Would you like to see it? PM me back.

Great work, I've actaully read this serval times, but never reviewed till now =)

“I DON’T WANT TO BE PRETTY!”

Ha ha I cracked up when I read that.


And who knew Kira ocs on Suger, in realitly, you get lots of zits =( ha ha, but I liek it in this story.



'Award for most times F*cking is used in a sentance Awarded to Yzak Joule'
*holding trophy* "See! I told you it f*cking exist, F*ck you since you didn't even f*cking believe me!! Now f*cking back off, I need to go polish it!" Yzak yells at Dearka, the 'non-believer'

ha ha, just jokes.

10/10 This is going on my FAV Stories List!!

I would kill for a picture.

I have read through chapter 6 and it was totally hilarious... Lacus sure an evil one... ne?

*Cries tears of joy* Long live YzaDea!Stubborn foul-tempered commander finally found his one and only true love!! Never thought Yzak will turn back to normal so soon =P but the ending is beautiful^^ the last chapter was unexpected,though. Didnt know that Lacus can be so...well, at least she has some good intentions ^^ =P Nice!

This is hulariously funny, I enjoyed reading it.

My horribly late review! I was too lazy to log-in, gomen ne!
I love this fic! Poor Yzak, he's been through so much, hasn't he? Although I would like to see him with cat ears and tail..maybe he should completely turn into a cute neko next time...imagine the look on his cat face!! Eek!! That would be so cute!

HAHAHAHA. Oh man, what an awesome twist. First I thought Yzak was going to give the potion to Dearka, and this time DEARKA would be a girl. Then I just thought YZAK would go back to being a girl. But then he got cat ears and a tail! Yikes. Too funny. Not my thing, but still really hysterical.

I really did enjoy this fanfic. Probably one of the most creative and amusing Dearka/Yzak fics I've read. Congrats on finishing. It was a blast (and I'm kind of sad it's over). XD

ok,
here is my reciew as promised.
well overall a nice story and rather fun too,
in one of the chapters yzak had to dress as meer and sing 'emotion' by rie tanaka that was real fun to read,
but if it wud had been 'shoot' by tomokazu seki it wud had been better because yzak's VA sings it and it is one of the GS/D soundtracks (yzak's image song)

the last chapter, i say was the best of all ROFL yzak having cat ears and a tail :P :D

Pft hehehe! Go Lacus! XD

You're only fourteen?! Wouldn't have guessed that. Well, who knows - maybe you'll get the hang of writing NC-17 or R stuff sooner or later, virgin or not. I'm nineteen and a virgin and writing that stuff doesn't give me issues at all. ;P Then again, it could be the age. The older you get, the more you figure out, whether you've done it yourself or not, bwahaha. Except now you've made me wonder whether my writing would improve if I did go and - uh, but, we'll leave that kind of thought to inside my own head.

The "awkwardness ensued" line totally killed me. SO funny. And then I got further down, read the "awkwardness resumed," and practically fell off my chair laughing. I mean, I'm not even sure it was that terribly hysterical, but it must have hit me in just the right way. Hehehe. That whole section was brilliance and now I can't breathe.

Nice laundry tip. You're right about that damn denim.

Wow, Yzak knows ALL Dearka's dirty little secrets. That's some SERIOUS blackmail material right there.

Oh wow, I said that last comment before I kept reading, and then you went and said it yourself in the text. Blackmail. Heh. Aww, but what a cute ending for those two. I'm glad that Dearka likes Yzak no matter what.

OMFG. Your narration is so perfect. It feels like I'm watching a movie. As your voice narrates about going back to last night, the scene flickers from the two boys in bed immediately to Arnold and Shiho, and you're like "SCRATCH THAT," and the screen goes all flickery and fuzzy and that weird noise like a skipping record player happens, and the screen gets calm again as it goes where you wanted it to, hahaha. Sorry if that made no sense, but I just think it's so funny.

This was a great chapter. I know there's more, but I have to go to work very early tomorrow, so I'm going to bed. I look forward to the next one, though! XD

*claps* woohoo!! ^^ such great story! Aww, isn't it cute?? those 2 together although yzak has returned into a guy ^^
and haha, cat ears n tail!! 0.0 i can't say anything! The evil pink princess will always win at the end hahaha
your welcome ^^