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| Starshinesoldier 2007-08-25 ch 4, anon. | abuseaw! this is so cute! I love all your stories, won't you update this one soon? |
| Seanshine 2007-06-03 ch 4, | abuseThat was heartwarming after the sadness in Ino's life ;_;... Very good Lima~~ ^_^ XD |
| Seanshine 2007-06-03 ch 3, | abuseThat part of Ino's history made me prefer Ino over Sakura, her best friend just dropped her all over a crush. Really bad... ;_; I liked this chapter to~ You keep saying all your stories are crap but you are a filthy liar. '-' Shika hates your lies Lima! XD |
| Seanshine 2007-06-03 ch 2, | abuse...Waka Waka doo doo yeah! XD... I've liked both chapters I've read so far. ^-^ Onwards to victory !! |
| Seanshine 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuse'-' |
| Insomnia Productions 2007-05-22 ch 4, | abuseVery cute! I can't wait to see where you go with this. ♥ |
| kuyaga 2007-01-13 ch 4, | abuseI really like how this is written- everybody is perfectly in character. Keep writing! :)~ |
| Nymphadorena 2007-01-11 ch 4, | abusei'm reveiwing! i shall bribe you with one! ok! START! for one thing, i absoloutly LOVE the story and read the whole thing just right now. i was hooked. the plot developement is amazing, fantastical, supurb--NOT ENOUGH ADJECTIVES! i can't think of a single thing wrong with this-NOT A SINGLE THING! you said chapter 3 was crappy, but it wasn't! it was sad, yes, but it really expresses ino's pain and her side of the story. i agree. i HATE sakura with a passion, and you fully bring it out her BITCHINESS! the way her friends treated her was awful, but NOT crappy! it was an important part of her developement. the feelings between her and shikamaru are so intense! so strong! i can't wait for their relationship to fully bloom, and i hope it will be a rich and long read. i love the story to bits and i am waiting, about to explode, for the next chapter. |
| mistress of mist 2007-01-11 ch 4, | abuseOkay!! reviews are poaring into you email account! just like spam! I like it.. but i wonder why sasuke neverr blew up with all those girls around.. and why Shikamaru was so much like me a super lazy, negative person.. buti don't have his smarts... unforunatly.. then i'd never have to study... |
| marlene 2007-01-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseoh please more updates its a great history |
| tomboy14 2007-01-11 ch 4, | abusevery nice chapter. sorry i didn't review earlier, i just stumbled across this fic. lol the garden scene was very cute. shika and chouji are really nice if they put some effort into it. lol i hate ino bashing. she has gone through a lot. i hope this fic changes people's minds. well, update soon because i ca't wait to get farther into the story line and the romance to really begin. it is so original and awesome! XD |
| WriterRen 2007-01-11 ch 4, | abuseThat chapter was awesome! yay! I'm so glad you updated! Plez update again soon! Kunai |
| CrazyGunFire 2006-12-17 ch 3, | abuseWell i liked teh chapter. It was very good. I've read a lot of Ino bashing as well and now i really don't like reading them whatever. I like it though. |
| nobody10 2006-10-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseNow I KNOW you're torturing us readers. That third chapter was SAD. I mean, really sad. I almost cried. (ALMOST!) Stop beating yourself up. Those three chapters were great, not crappy! Even though your writing could use more detail, your dialogue makes up for what you lack in detail. I can't wait until you update. And by the way, if you have trouble with detail, I would reccomend you start writing in first person. (I, me, mine.) First person writing lets you get away with little detail, but you have to have a lot of character thoughts to do it. ...May I make a request? Could you please make a GaaraIno oneshot? According to your profile, you enjoy that pairing, and so do I. I know that'll just make another thing for you to write, but... I'd hail to you if you did! (There's just not enough GaaraIno around...) |
| Pampers Baby Dry 2006-09-23 ch 3, | abusethis is kinda sad, making me cry man, she loses her friends over a guy, how freakin retarded, boys aren't worth ** when you've lost ur friends, i so cant wait for the next chapter oh the anticipation, i'm quakin in my chair, continue soon see yha |