Great story! please update

*Looks at nicola-235 and 1wingangel reviews and whistles*

Wow. Harsh. Ah well, not everyone can like your stories, do they? Maybe what they're saying is right, but hey, it's your story and you can write it however you want. Don't take that from them if you enjoy your story. Heh, if anyone did that to me, I'd probably sack them in the face and flip them off.

Your Ocs seem realistic. I mean, they don't listen to Leon at all and act very irresponsible and they now cringe every time he speaks because of the lack of trust between them that they created. And they seem very sorry and they try to make it up, but their tempers get in the way and the situation gets worse. They go for some other advice (Claire's and not Chris') and they decide to try it out. Leon is still ** off at them, but they continue to try and earn his trust. That is what some humans do during those type of situations. Try and try even though it seems impossible. Please continue!

Pretty awesome. I love all the plot twists! God I wish I was home playing the game now. Hope to see an update soon.

Very nice. I was not expecting the xeiling to fall... And also: YOU SAVED LUIS! HOOWAY! *Hugs burning*

Yes that was a bit bizarre. Hmm...

I don't know what it is, maybe you guys should take a break or something, but it kind of feels like it's dragging, you kno? Like, you could pick it up and have it be good, or let it drag - kind of an odd metaphor...yea...Well what i'm tryin to say is there are some parts that could be better. Like, whne you're recountin the story to Claire, i was expectin this slightly remorseful, slighlty sad tone, but it came off like as if one was tellin a story to a five year old right before they go to bed. also, with the Verdugo, when they were sneaking past it, that could've been a little more suspensful.

But i like how you're startin to adress this issue with Leon and you guys. It makes the story more complicated, sure, but gives it more depth; you're not jst trying to beat the game, but you're also giving depth to yourselves and Leon, more so than what we know already. It's good that you try, and I'm noticing some character progression!

And once again with the plots twists. You're buildin up to somthing, i kno it. Like always, I look forward to your guys' next chapter.

Nice story, I've read many RE 4 stories, bu this is one of the best. I'm gonna read the whole thing later though.

Sweet! Love this fic. A lame way to die but at least it was funny. *Chibi me cowaring next to a wall while watching a very ticked Leon* Wow...I've never seen or heard Leon that ** before... I don't want to be in the recieving end of his anger. But I'll be there just to see him mad! Heroes look so cool when **!

I love this! Imagine...Leon...as a father. *Squeals* I would love to see him with a kid...as long it's not from Ashely. Um, why is Vee so mean to Leon?

Good job! I'm really getting in to the story! You guys are good! I hope you write more soon!

Man! You guys are god! The chapter was long whic I like! But you guys left me hanging!! P;ease write more! And please read my story! It's my first! YEAH!

I like it. Very funny way to die. Mua ha ha. I love the game and this thing is just halarious

Hooray! Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update! Great story you have running here, funny as hell. Gotta love the insert stories! Keep up the good work! Favorite part this chapter: Rocket Launcher Malfunction.

i remember this part was hard for me cause i had to shoot the restrants wit the blacktail i killed her the first time
im still reading but i just wanted to say that

I gotta agree with nicola-235, the characters in this fanfiction are very OOC. Especially Wesker, what you've done to him just makes me sad. Why on Earth is he even in Spain when he sent Ada to collect the Sample there? And, what really bothers me- WHY is he suddenly attached to a weaponless, defenseless teenage girl with ADD and an obsession with music? The IN-character Albert Wesker would just stay in his Umbrella laboratory and give orders; he'd never go to Spain himself, much less baby-sit a girl that mildly suppresses obvious affections for him.

The descriptions -or lack thereof- leave something to be desired, and the pace is irritatingly quick. Leon's "fatherly side" is terribly unlike him, even with your impossible background of the other-dimensional Vee and Travis. And all of the S.T.A.R.S happening to recruit themselves on the same plane that Vee and Travis were on... ugh. There are better ways to incorporate RE characters into fanfictions, really.

And the interactions between your characters and the canon characters really makes me cringe. Not only can you not portray the canons as they would be in their respective games, but how they act towards your characters (Wesker instantly protects Vee! UGH!) is not only way OOC, it's downright stupid. No one saves Wesker's life. Wesker can take care of himself. Ada wouldn't mouth off to her superhuman boss, she'd keep her thoughts to herself. Ugh...

So no, "Crazy" really "Doesn't Begin to Describe" this story. Start with "Sickeningly OOC" and "Worse Than Average Self-Insertions", and go down from there.

lol

P.S. You forgot to give Leon teh rocket launcher