whoa its so good, very pretty infact. you should write more

Astounding.

Pretty good. ^_^ But again, Johnny is not spelled Jhonny.

Also, why do you have a warning for a het scene? Do you know that het is short for heterosexual, as in the opposite of slash, boy/girl love?

It´s good but just too short...really...it´s really too short...

That was good!!Update soon please!