Wow, another great piece of work!

I'll admit that tears were dabbing at the corners of my eyes while I read the scene about Fuego burning out. That was quite sad, actually. And yes, what did our dear Arty want from Holly at the beginning? My guess is for her to contact him more... but it's just a guess. (:

Also, I agree that Juliet's character seemed a little weak... as well as Butler's. Holly's temper is certainly something to remember. XD It kinda surprised me as well, because in the end of the actual series, they were pretty good friends. I didn't expect her to mistrust Arty that much.

Otherwise, this fic is also <3. Keep up the good work! ^^

EXTREMELY great story! I love it. if you consider a sequel, I really think that you should follow through with it!

I like it very much well done:)

I like the end. Juliet is a little clumsily made, but good for the most part. Alfred is funny.

Soo.. what was it that our dear Arty wanted to ask Holly?

HOLLY and artemis

the end was a little anti climatic but good none of the less

AH! artemis has been, "consumed by flames"!!

*gasp!* i know what they are! nanananana! i read ahead! YAY!

good, good...

mulch! YEA!

Awesome job on this. Very original idea but I would of liked it to be a little more action filled but it was a welcomed change of pace. You have a lot of potential so keep working at it!

YAY! this is COOL! nice! excelant! YAY! i think your name thingy is cool! i like night animals too! but then again, i like all animals... but i REALLY like night animals! YAY!

I LOVED YOU STORY! it was *ahem* happy, sad, enjoyable, and most of all... I LOVED IT!

great deep fic and especially the cookies, but what did he wanted in exchange for his services? I am dieing to know!