all can be stated in one word from Meryl to Knives, "Never", hehehe, lol, i hope she gives him a migrane

This is dark, lol.

Leaves one thinking... It's like the ending is there for you to decide.

Of course, it's obvious it'll involve some torturing, probably some sex with Knives(which isn't too bad, if u ask me), and Meryl submitting...sounds like good thoughts to me lol

Great oneshot! I can totally see Knives ruling. lol

I'm wondering if it is a good idea to continue this one, or leave it as it is. If you did continue, this one is off to a good start. But I have to think about poor Meryl...although, the tension between them probably wouldn't last for long. It'd turn into a love story, no doubt. And I am willing to bet that Vash would interfere. He isn't dead, right? There is definitely more story, here.

Ohh, this is definitely something that should be continued. I love the idea of Knives being the cruel overlord. Hope you add to this one.

Loved it. Confusing at some points but I did indeed love it!

Perfect until the very end, where you had a few minor tense confusions. At first I thought it would be neat to go back and revise it so it has more of Knives' reasoning behind the Meryl thing in it, but in hindsight it's really an example of 'less is more.' Excellent, excellent one-shot.

I loved it! Oh he is just so bad isn't he? I think the best bad guys are the ones you secretly want to win (and Knives is certainly one of the best), so this was quite the indulgence. Great job!

Ooh this is great! I really liked the way you describe the carrying out of his plans and what's happened since his victory. You really made him out to be a gorgeous bastard in this with mere words! Love it!

What a great story! The thought that Knives would intentionally seek out Vash's loved ones to deliver eternal pain and suffering where Legato had tried and failed...brilliant! Plus, the allusion to Steinbeck's "Best Laid Plans of Mice and Men" was tastful.

I loved the nuances of Knives in the oneshot, not to mention the combustibility of the scene between Meryl and Knives. Sometimes it's great to read a story without a happy ending. I enjoyed this one very much! Thanks for the great read.

Whoa. LOL, Good writing! Knives tagging the humans like cattle sounds like something he'd end up doing. Good work! I love the way this was written. Many thumbs up to you. =D

—Alaena

I love you. Great story. *claps*

It's so great to read a story by an author so adept at visualization. Some authors just gloss over the details, but you know how to set the scene and let us imagine the motions and pictures without being too obtrusive.

Truly, I'm a fan. You always write such yummy Knives/Meryl interactions and this one is no exception.

P.S - we both know Meryl let Knives catch her hands on purpose cause she wanted to sit on his lap. She's sneaky like that. Planned the entire thing. ;-)

This was so creepily well written that I absolutely love it! You got right into the mind of Knives and everything seemed so plausible!
Wonderfully done! Hope you had a Happy Knives Day!

Nope...no joke. I am so glad that you decided to participate in Knives' Day this year! *gives you a big hug and a cookie*

I can't tell you how happy I was to see a KM. And such a well-written one at that. Entirely plausible.

Your descriptions make it so easy to visualize exactly what's going on in this story. Very wicked.

I hope you had a good Knives' Day!

- Kat