More please? He's managed to smile can we see him speak?

I LOVE these two stories! I was wondering, will you continue with this plot line? Maybe make it into a multichapter? Your an awsome writer and I'd love to see this continued.

I am a huge fan of Final Fantasy 7 and I just loved your fanfic. Keep up the good work!

*sniffles while hugging an imaginary Cloud-plushie* So much hurt in that poor boy!

You write the disconnection and all the broken so well I'm tempted to ask if you've been mako-poisoned yourself (though I realize it's not likely). The fear and the the struggle and the way Zack is the only thing that really matters... Add in Zack's continued reassurances and faith in Cloud's recovery, and you've got me teary-eyed.

Very well done!

Oh gosh. This was lovely. There's Cloud in his not-so-concious Mako state, and then there's Zack with his unwavering hope. After the Rain was great too and... write more? :D

I really like this story, it's well written and keeps making me wonder why it doesn't have more reviews! ! !

Well, it doesn't seem to be a one-shot, but if it is it's perfect! If not then i'll be happily awaiting the next chapters! ! !

Keep up the good work! !

P.S. Sorry if this showed up more than once. My computer was being a pain, and i pushed the Submit button WAY to many times. .