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kait
2008-10-20 . chapter 3
i dont understand :(

i dont get the last bit...

:S

still made me cry tho...
addy
2008-08-19 . chapter 3
I loved this it's so true the ending part... I cried! yesterday was a year for my grandparent dying and I think the last part helped me better than anything anyone has said to me...
Sui-Tsuki
2008-05-16 . chapter 3
how sad, but i love it, good work, and nice plot...i so totally love it!
Alice-Wheres-my-razor.
2008-02-26 . chapter 3
...I am going to be flat out serious write now.
i.am.crying.
this was the sadest thing that i have ever seen.

and out of my tears i have one questioned...
what happen to Edaward?
candyandie
2007-06-24 . chapter 3
i'm practically sobbing right now. you. are. amazing. i know you think i'm just being nice, but you really are. we love to torture these characters, and you do it very well. i was listening to wishing you were somehow here again, from phantom of the opera, and it made me cry even more. :(
TKxxx
2007-06-21 . chapter 3
So sad! But I loved this alternate ending though. I almost cried during Alice's explanation.
dancrgrl16714
2007-05-13 . chapter 3
ok so i just finished reading both crimson hope and all hope is lost and i thought they were both amazing you are a very talented writer and im typing this as fast as i can because i want to move on to indigo sin i love that you write a story in alice's pov there arent that many people talented enough to do it but you did amazing!
EdwardDazzlesMe
2007-05-01 . chapter 3
Wow. Heartwrenching.
Mrs-Edward-Cullen
2007-03-26 . chapter 3
gotta say that i liked the original ending better...why? you ask...cuz this is so amazingly sad that i'm crying right now..but all the same, it was beautifully written! i loved it, no matter how sad.
Miranda
2007-01-02 . chapter 3
Omg this was so sad congrats I love your works. One of these day I might come across your own Vampire love/ drama stories. Till then I love your writtings; keep writting, believe in yourself and don't let anyone hold you down no matter who it might be.

bye
Miranda
*Ps I'm working on a book actually books right now; its hard but fun*
NightPredator
2007-01-01 . chapter 3
Oh my god. So sad. You really made it sound like Rosalie intended to die and purposely drove off that cliff. So sad, but so beuatiful. I can't help but also say that it sounded very...I'm not sure if philisohpical is the right word, but I'm going with it.

Absolutely beautiful

Sarah
AKA NightPredator
afraidtoseewhathasbecome
2006-12-28 . chapter 3
oh God.
that was so sad. it has me crying right now. i feel so bad for all of the characters. edward, what happens to him?? this is one of the best fan ficcys ive heard in a while. very deep and intense you are a very very talented author and im really not just saying that. fabulous. keep on writing!
ahh im soo obssesed now. damn why do u have to be so good. you really have me beleiving all of your stuff. ive only read twilight and now when i get my hands on a copy of new moon i wont be able to read it cuz i keep thinking that bella is dead. i cant even believe youre actual ending to the original, all i can think of is this one. im soo sad now! waa ok well calm down self this is only a fan ficcy in the real one edward and bella will be alive and happy together im sure. this is getting long but i just wanted to say that this is the best fan ficcy ever, and that you are an incredibly deep and intense and talented author. but yea thats all.
NotMixedEqually
2006-12-28 . chapter 3
i love the way you write. and no i am not just being nice. crimson hope is one of my favorite stories even though this epilogue made me cry. you are really talented! keep writing!
RoxyLeo
2006-12-14 . chapter 3
Oh. My. God.
You made me start sobbing.
You have skills, you know that?
foreverinlove17
2006-12-14 . chapter 3
As Sasd as it may be I loved this epilogue.. I know you mentioned that you were going to write a sequel to the story.. When do you think it will be posted (you are proably sick and tired of hearing that question)
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