That's really creative

Just F.Y.I. it's
you are my sunshine,my only sunshine
you make me happy when skys are grey
you'll never know, dear, how much I love you
please don't take my sunshine away.
Trust me, I know. I had a toy clown that perminentally imprented that song in my head.
Interesting idea with the lullibies.Very origenal.I like it.
Keep writing.

cute. i like gazzy's song. update soon.

Okay, sorry I haven't read/reviewed until now, and considering the excellence of this chapter, I REALLY wish I didn't have to wait until now to read it. But might I ask what the beginning part was about? Was it some personal experience of yours? I have never said and might never say this again, but it was melodic. Seriously, that's as close as I can get to describing how adorable and sweet and sensitive it was! You really have to update soon, keep sharing your gift of romance writing!

:O Golden Slumbers? I had to sing that for my Grade 3 singing exam.

I liked this one, even though I've never heard of the lullaby.

Update in less than 4 months?

Clyde x

great chappie
post asap plz

GAH! FREAKY!

...Holy crap. Has anyone told you you are amazing lately. Cause really. DAMN.

I'm normally very, very, very, very wary of any kind of fanfiction. Especially for things I adore, like Maximum Ride. But just. Damn, that was good. Though I have a sinking feeling I'm going to run into eight other peices of crap after this. -sigh- oh well, it can't be all bad. I mean, this does seem to update (almost as fast as me XD)

Later Days
Xazz

AH

WRITE. MORE. NOW.

Seriously, your stories are good.

sounds cool...more soon?

*Hides under the table* I'm getting ready.

You updating this is a sign of the apocolypse. I'm ascared now. O.O

xD Fabulous update! I hope the next one is a little bit sooner than this. xD

EA

O! I like this story! Write more ASAP!

Love,
Brooke!

Aw, I think this lullaby idea is so cute and sweet! whens the next chappie?

nice aspect of lullabies :D
post soon plz

very interesting power