|Reviews for Opportune Moment|
| Quirky Del 7/29/06 . chapter 2
Ah, 'Lizabeth sounds to be in denial, hmm, methinks so. This was a lovely little ending:
"Afterwards, sitting still and staring at the dark Elizabeth pressed a palm against her chest and shivered.
Elizabeth could not live without her compass.
Unfortunately, she had not realized she could not live without her heart either."
| Quirky Del 7/29/06 . chapter 1
This is good. A series of vignettes, sounds promising! I particularly liked this line:
"Little Lizzie might want to marry Will but he was sure she just plain wanted him."
That summed it all up rather well, I thought!
| JeanieBeanie33 7/29/06 . chapter 10
Oh darn, I was hopeful for an epic scale adventure. But I'm sure I'll be satisfied with the epilogue! Romance will always do!
| Muse-at-dawn 7/29/06 . chapter 10
Beautiful I simply love it, good end very lovely I hope I can read more fics from you, then see you
| Hazel Maraa 7/29/06 . chapter 9
| JeanieBeanie33 7/29/06 . chapter 9
I'm discovering that I quite like fluff; me and Jack are alike in that we have hopeless romantics deep down somewhere inside of us.
| angelofmynightmare 7/29/06 . chapter 9
Hahaha...that was, well, I dunno what it was.
Sexy? a little more on the right track :D
Anyway, is that the end? I know I ask this every chapter...well, at least the last two, but I'm curious whether this was just a get-the-girl story or a get-the-girl-and-have-a-marvelous-adventure-afterw ards story.
Very good story. You're doing a good job of writing Jack and Elizabeth :D
| MysticValkyrie 7/29/06 . chapter 9
I love it!
| FanFiction.net fan 7/29/06 . chapter 9
Lol! Yep, Jacks already looked!
Yep! I agree with Jack's remark! How often has he been slapped in the movies? At least 4 times? And Will's even been slapped as a message for Jack!
Lol! Good one Jack! Nah, I don't think Elizabeth would be able to put up with Barbossa for more than thirty seconds!
Great chapter! And Jack's back to normal! Yay!
| Muse-at-dawn 7/28/06 . chapter 9
lovely I really like it thanks a lot, that's really good
| Cheerioaddict13 7/28/06 . chapter 9
That, was exquisitely beautiful. I love how the emotions overshadowed the dialogue and plot. It's brilliant how you captured what every jack/elizabeth shipper feels and turned it into this. Excellent.
| Shadow Phenix 7/28/06 . chapter 8
I really like this and the style you've written it in. Looking forward to the rest.
| JeanieBeanie33 7/28/06 . chapter 8
Will is a gentleman. I do believe he and Elizabeth will get together, but still, you actually made this breaking up realistic.
Glad that Jack woke up! For a moment there, I was concerned. An uncaring Jack Sparrow...that's scary.
| Hazel Maraa 7/28/06 . chapter 8
Aww! Great chapter! Hazel*
| FanFiction.net fan 7/28/06 . chapter 8
For a few lines there I thought it was from Will's point of view.
And of course Jack can't wait for some rum. Lol.
Lol! Jack's willing to see where it goes!