   NewMrs.Edward Cullen
2007-11-27 . chapter 1cute! |
 Your Sparrow
2006-12-07 . chapter 1very cute, but a little too short. Maybe you should've built it up a little bit more? Just a suggestion. Nice work, though.
~*((jAdE))*~ |
 Aubrey45
2006-11-15 . chapter 1I liked it. The only thing you could do to make it better would be to make it a little bit longer, with some suspense. But other than that, it was good. |
mew cinnamon
2006-11-08 . chapter 1 Fluff, lots of Yumi+Ulrichy goodness!!
-mew cinnamon |
DizCraziiPnaii
2006-07-26 . chapter 1its cute! i love it! |
Flames Chaos and Wolf
2006-07-24 . chapter 1Nice. |
Angels 'n Dreams
2006-07-23 . chapter 1 CUTE! I loved it! I can totally just picture it happening!! Cute!! Keep up the good work! |
 Tsuiraku Nami
2006-07-23 . chapter 1Aww...that was really sweet! |
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