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| cheryl sidle 2006-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseLOVED it! |
| JayBee-Bug 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseHee, this is awesome too. (I read Forget the Flowers first) Like I said before, the snark is exquisite, and this very endearing and humorous the whole way through. Love it! |
| tokengeekshipper 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseYou are just too much fun! Your style is right on... ONLY GRISSOM could pull off a line like "If only it were rocket science, I might stand a chance." PLEASE KEEP GOING WITH THIS! |
| TAE1 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was just lovely, and hilarious. I can SO see him arguing with himself over this. Well done! And when people ask me if I talk to myself, I reply: "Absolutely! Some times, it's the ONLY way to get an intelligent conversation going!" |
| abigailc 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI think we all have conversations with ourselves at one or another. Anyone that tells you different is not telling you the truth. I just hope he wasn't talking out loud. The neighbors won't be calling the cops they'll be calling the funny mobile. Good job. |
| sweet-surrender5 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseUp yours. No – up the stairs! -laughs maniacally- eye luv it! hahah. awesome. i definately have those kinds of moments. sometimes i make myself laugh. and you know, i have such a crazy horse-y laugh that people laugh too when i laugh. seriously. hahah. anyway, this one was cool. fresh, even. very nice. dont mind me im hyper. too much iced cappochino. |
| stareagle 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat story- I loved the conversation with his conscience! It was funny and honest- how often we argue with ourselves when we don't want to admit we are wrong! or when we have to do something we know is right, but is scary because so much is at stake. - Thank you |
| RenLissa 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute - I needed the laugh. Thanks |
| planetmarz 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Gosh! This was such a great story! Man! I love the way Grissom was fighting with his Conscience... :) PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
| Santa's lil helper 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is a hoot--I love it!! |
| chiops 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat idea - you had me laughing out loud :-) |
| Digidestened7 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abusehaha! That was pretty funny XD Yay! He made it up the steps!! Heh, good story =] |