Reviews for An Auralen's Footsteps

Reviews For: An Auralen's Footsteps

Kage Touzoku 2007-09-05 ch 10,	abuseI cannot WAIT to read the next one! The way you paint an image in the reader's head is stunning. It feels like I'm watching this story like a movie! Please write more soon! All your stories are awesome! goes off to shamelessly advertise all your stories
TheShadowUnderneathYourBed 2007-06-11 ch 10,	abuseWow! That...was...so...AWESOME!!I can't wait for the next one! Truly a wonderful story from a wonderful author. Keep it up and don't let the lack of reviews keep you down! Some people just don't have a refined taste.
Maiden of Wolves 2007-04-17 ch 10,	abuseOh my gosh, that was one of the best stories I have ever read! You HAVE to write the last one!! I can't beleive more people haven't reveiwed! Keep up the wonderful work!! You have such a great style and even thought your stories are tragic, they're so meaningful that they actually made me cry! You're one of my favorite authors and I can't wait to see what else you write!
666 2007-03-14 ch 10, anon.	abuseI Love your story!:) It's good and doesn't drag on for too long like other stories without comprisiming quality. :)
itachiluvr7 2006-09-24 ch 10,	abuseso sad... everyone dies...but i love this story, i can't believe u only got three reviews...i feel for aya...
Heart's Door 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abuseah! i'm sorry if i was too negative on the other review! >< i suddenly realized right after i wrote the review and turned off the computer that i forgot to write the good points of the story! (and that made me feel really bad...) >< so since the other review was almost entirely made up of the bad ponts in the story, this review is going to be almost entirely filled with the good points in the story! 1)i thought the idea of a phoenix was nice. especially since she was going against the snow country. fire against ice, ya know. ^^ 2)Kari's lecture was also kind of touching. and very true in real life. though a bit cheesy, i enjoyed that part. it was very sister-like/protecter-like/whatever-you'd-like-to-call-it/ 3)even though Aya's search for her own identity was a bit rushed and pretty brief, it was still good. i liked the idea, even though it wasn't expressed that much. 4)it was also creative to have the character, Hiromi, have the same misson as Aya - killing the other for their village. 5)the scene at the beginning of the story, with sakura and sasuke was also very sweet. ^^ 6)the thought of having the four dead Uchihas protecting the field was pretty cool. (i can imagine it in an actual anime.) 7)and even though gaara was a bit more ooc than he should have been, his new personality and his speech at Aya's funeral was still pretty touching. (too bad he didn't really understand the speech in your other fanfic. XP) but in the end, all the good points balance the good! i think. but it was good! ^^; i hope i don't sound like i'm just trying to make you feel better because of my review! okay, i'll admit, that's a little why i wrote this review, but it's also because i realized that you deserve a lot more credit than i gave you in the other review! you write a lot better than i ever could and i wanted you to know that! cries and bows apologetically and oh so pitifully but i still believe that my other review was true too. but anyway, bows again please continue on with your writing and i hope you'll become the best writer yet! >
Heart's Door 2006-08-30 ch 10,	abuseIndividually, all the chapters were well-written. However, as a whole, the story wasn't exactly the best. You should have drawn out the events more to convey the emotions better. For example, when you wrote that Hiromi missed Aya after her death and everything, I didn't really comprehend it (if you know what I mean) because he didn't seem to spend that much time with her in the story. If you had wanted the reader to feel that way too, you should have written more about the time Hiromi took care of Aya. You also should have written more about the Phoenix Method. But you still did a nice job. :)
Dante Asakura 2006-07-27 ch 10,	abuseSquek...ah this was a cool story ^_^

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