 Peeka-chan 2009-01-03 . chapter 1This is lovely, and in character. ^^ Great job! |
 PK 2007-03-04 . chapter 1 Well the writing in this story was certainly easy on my eyes since I've been staring at a computer screen all day. Anyway, this fic made me smile and I still love this couple (even though I like SetoxMai more). |
 Lea Smith 2006-11-10 . chapter 1 That was a very funny story, and I espacally liked how you ended it. So(I have to ask) in your oppinion do you think they should get married? Why or why not? |
 Journey Maker 2006-11-10 . chapter 1 This is a really sweet story.. Thanks for writing it. I loved how Joey got Mai up on the roof and then the proposal, how romantic.. Great Job... |
 darkrunner 2006-10-17 . chapter 1SQUEE! ^_^
I've never read a story that was all dialouge before, but that was really good. I was confused by "Sato" at first (I thought you misspelled "Seto" and it was a puupy/polar fic, which I HATE) but besides that, it was PERFECT!!
This goes on my favorite stories list! |
 chickenbeans 2006-08-06 . chapter 1Wow, the dialogue absolutely sparkled in this fic. It was really nice how all the words were completely in character, and how you could sort of *see* the characters talking. Your style of writing (With pure dialogue) was probably more effective than the regular show and describe. Great job! |
 ff_crazy 2006-08-04 . chapter 1 hehe, that was cute! Funny too, you are a good writer! write more! |
 Sakurelle 2006-07-24 . chapter 1 That was cute ^^ |
 Priya-chan 2006-07-24 . chapter 1This is utterly adorable! The style of the writing really fits the dialogue. Please write more like this! :D |
 Growing Pain 2006-07-24 . chapter 1*chuckles* Absolutely adorable! :D Aw, the JouMai fluff! ^.^ So extremely cute AND well done. I don't really like when there's only dialouge, but you managed it with ease in my opinion :) Kudos for having a really good characterisation too! |