hmm... i'd like to see more.

I like it! That's how I imagined it would be if Elphie didn't really die.

"How many castles do you have?"

that's my favorite line, by far. I loved it, it was so sweet. You know what, I say go for it, if you want to continue it!

Very good.

By and by: I have a wonderful suade notebook I cart around everywhere! :)