that was an enjoyable read

I think it was a good idea for a story but you made it to short, with barely any plot and no jokes.

very is a perfect drunk.

Hehe, that's funny. Poor Ax. Lioness

Well I would of liked to have seen Ax saying all this crazy stuff while we was drunk but it was a cool idea itself. It gets a narf.

That was cool! Always wanted to read a story about that.

ROFLOL!

Umm...good. Don't know what else to say. Pretty average fic. I can't even say the concept is original since I've done it before, so, yeah...::END TRANSMISSION::

Hah!That was good!I figured that would happen to Ax someday

Wow. That is a plot that isn't overused. ) In fact, I think you're the second person ever to do that! But it's the first fic. I give it a whopping 9! (E-mail me plz!)

That was cool. EEEPS! Someone take the keys away from Ax! NOOO!

::snaps fingers:: I don't usually point out problems, but you left off a ".

That was good, but it wasn't dramatic enough for my personal tastes, and there weren't enough details. Stay sweet.