Good writing

A great story. I liked the part where Angel made a sandwhich for Dawn.

kool

That was a very sweet story..

I didn't see the last season of Angel so some of this chapter is puzzling to me. But it's good to see Dawn and Angel connecting. Thanks to his exit from the show before she was "created" we never got to figure out the dynamics of the connection there between them. Good tale if a bit short.

Heartfelt. Nice story.

Well now...I certainly think this is great and could be the start of something bigger. But it's you show, so I will just offer my hearty congratualations at a job well done and silently hope for more;)

BEB

Yes. Very nice story. Do more please.