Im not one to read H\Hr but since my Bestie Tony does we read it! It was actually Really good! I love the way he purposed it was sweet=))
*FMPM*
~Tony says You made Hermy Hotter than Ever~Thnks=))

Very nice!

Omfg. I loved this! It was really great. The ending was awesome!! Great job!! :D

i loved the story!

cool... hope tis is on portkey as well

Loved it! My friend Kikioblack read it as well, and she liked it to. Way to go!

-Bridget-
MG
MWB

very nice writing! good work! if you have time could u read and review my fics cause i never get many reviews but i still love them

from shaggy sirius

I really really like it nice I like this one #1

I loved it!

that was really wonderful. you are awesome writer.

This is a great sexy secene fic! I'm not a pervert though, but you have a great story! that's not a lie. Looking forward for your future fanfics.

Adorable! I loved the "He proved to her that he could have her and his cake at the same time" line. SO awesome!

Well that ending left interpertation!! When I read the last line I just started laughing!

Really liked this. :).

*inner sam still laughing*
omg *giggle giggle* i like the last 3 lines! lol byz