Rofl. This is one of my favourite scenes in the book, and I liked reading it from Gary's perspective.

I'm slowly working my way through all your stories! I loved this one; it just sounds like Gary!

I'm loving the Cavall's Heart stories too, are there going to be anymore in the arch, or do you think they're done?

Lisa x

hahahahahhahah, gotta love gary, at one point i thought he was gay. hahaha he just acts so camp.

LOVE IT! Such a different and interesting take on two different classic storylines.

Vampiremuggle

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Wonderfully done :)

cutesi (idk if spelling is rite it's pronounced cute-c as in the letter c)

I don't know why I've only come across this one-shot now. But I'm glad that I did - it was simply wonderful, in that Gary-is-wonderful way. The best part of the whole piece was how you tied it in to canon. Great work!

Fabulous! This is so well-woven with the material from the original book , it reads as though it really could have happened this way. Loved it! :D

I can't help it,

I just love it!

loved it!loved it!

that was one of the funniest fics i've read, i love how you tied it all together in the end to show what gary was thinking when alanna tells him she's a girl. awesome.

That was cool. I really enjoyed the concept. It was funny.

OH YOUR GOD! That is so awesome. I love the idea. Good job.

Ha, very amusing! Although I think it would have been funnier if Gary had asked Alanna if she was gay. Nice job and wonderful writing style.

Oh I love the way you did this. Nice!