This was actaully a good story! So you used dub names..it's okay. I think Not A Member really needs to grow up and get a life,and stop allowing him/herself to become unglued by the /she is giving us mature sub lovers a bad name,and embarrassing us.

Umm...That's just weird...Good, but...You didn't even spell Artemis right...And you're using dub names? Well, I don't like the dub. It sucks, it should die and burn in HELL! But you're fic is good, though.

LOL! That was hilarious! And the mouse still gets the cheese XD.

NICE! I was laughing my ass off! Very creative! Keep it up!

i luv it!

Instant favorite! I will definatly send this out to some friends! Its so funny! I was always a fan of Tom, and felt bad for Artimus, but I was giggling the whole time! _* Liss!