More oh my word this so cool. the way you write you sound like Max Lacado.

Chapter 2 please

Well written story, SwordSkill. It's my taste.

Please post another chapter. I'm waiting :)

I will say now that im not a Christian. Though it inferurates(sp) me how some act. I do like your protrayel of God and the Angels. Keep writing

Most excellent but a small correction though, Lucifer has not yet turned ugly but is infact still a beautiful angel (perhaps not as beautiful as he once was but still an angel nonetheless) he shall not turn into the horny pitchfork devil people think of him as today until the Judgement day. *shrugs* incase you wanted to know but other than that much ado.

Awa

"God dammnot an angel when i die"-Rammstein

Whoa... I... I love it! Is there more? PLEASE tell me there's more! I'm dying to know what happens next!

This is very interesting , will you write more?

WOW! This seemed so real! I could actually see this take place!

WOW! MORE PLEASE!

Keenly written. Intriguing. Appaling. VERY EXCELLENT! I love this so much. I am adding this story and you to my favorites. VERY GOOD! I made a story about the Fall as well and I love how you described it. It is very nicely written and described. Did I mention I love it? Please do drop a line any time you wish. I would appreciate talking to such a fine author such as yourself. EXCELLENT WORK!

Wow. That is good. I love how you incorperated biblical fact with fiction. That's really awesome.

That was startling...but I don't completely agree with you on writing things from the Bible and turning them to fic...maybe just my own beliefs...I know you try to follow as much...but then...anyways, hope to hear from you soon! and how are you doing in UP? ('',)

Sounds like something I read from John Milton's "Paradise Lost." Keep writing, this is good!

WOW! Truly the spirit was with you while writing this. You have done an amazing job of depicting the begininning of the Holy War. Please continue writing!