 A Matter of Unimportance 2009-06-11 . chapter 1That was amazing. I loved the ending, blunt like Matt's death itself. |
 SkywardShadow 2009-03-27 . chapter 1Poetic. Very deep. You can really feel how...desperate he was, in the last seconds; the whole thing was flawlessly written. Magnificent job. |
 shufen2 2008-11-04 . chapter 1Wow, that was good. It was sort of dark, but at the same time it was really charges and almost... huh, something. I'll think of the word as soon as I hit the submit button. Sort of champion-like is the best I can do for now. But really, it was exquisite. |
 WithABunny 2008-06-10 . chapter 1No, Matt, no!
Anyway, on to the actual review:
I love the gritty style present here. It's dramatic, it's poignant, and yet there's an almost tangibly stark realism, if that makes sense.
The last line - "They shoot him down like a dog, and he’s dead before he hits the concrete." - was made of gold. It perfectly exemplifies what I just said - cold facts, incredibly realistic, and yet angst-ridden. |
 phoenix of hell 2007-08-30 . chapter 1Pretty dark, and I think it shows Matt's personality perfectly. |
 automailgurl 2007-08-17 . chapter 1O.O *_* That was amazing! |
 xBriYeon 2007-08-04 . chapter 1 Oh that hurt. >_< very painful, I loved it. |
 parading-graveyard 2007-02-17 . chapter 1Aw, that was ereally nice. Good angst, and quite well-written. |
 Maya-Nee 2007-02-16 . chapter 1I loved this!
Poor Matt ;__;
Beautiful writing |
 quaintessentially 2007-02-06 . chapter 1i love your style of writing! it's beautiful. i read your other stories too, n wat can i say except, you have my love! xD |
 Taskemus 2006-09-09 . chapter 1Gah, Matt's emotions here are so strong and poignant. ;__;
This is just... guh. I'm being terrible at reviewing but it's only because this was so good! That last line was just amazing... I've reread those last few sentences so many times.
The jumbled thoughts in parentheses are a nice touch, too. I also really like all the references you've got in here.
Um, sorry for spamming your stories, also. I had to click on your profile after that first fic and they are all just as wonderful. *_* |
 The Fritz 2006-08-27 . chapter 1Fantastic. I especially liked his inner thoughts. You have a very descriptive, yet readable style. Keep up the good work. |
 Generally Maz 2006-07-30 . chapter 1I love the inner thoughts in this |
 EarnestInBerlin 2006-07-24 . chapter 1This is good. It's creepy and artisitic in its own simplicity. |