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Reviews for: Trivial Magnificence
A Matter of Unimportance
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
That was amazing. I loved the ending, blunt like Matt's death itself.
SkywardShadow
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Poetic. Very deep. You can really feel how...desperate he was, in the last seconds; the whole thing was flawlessly written. Magnificent job.
shufen2
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
Wow, that was good. It was sort of dark, but at the same time it was really charges and almost... huh, something. I'll think of the word as soon as I hit the submit button. Sort of champion-like is the best I can do for now. But really, it was exquisite.
WithABunny
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
No, Matt, no!

Anyway, on to the actual review:

I love the gritty style present here. It's dramatic, it's poignant, and yet there's an almost tangibly stark realism, if that makes sense.

The last line - "They shoot him down like a dog, and he’s dead before he hits the concrete." - was made of gold. It perfectly exemplifies what I just said - cold facts, incredibly realistic, and yet angst-ridden.
phoenix of hell
2007-08-30 . chapter 1
Pretty dark, and I think it shows Matt's personality perfectly.
automailgurl
2007-08-17 . chapter 1
O.O *_* That was amazing!
xBriYeon
2007-08-04 . chapter 1
Oh that hurt. >_< very painful, I loved it.
parading-graveyard
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
Aw, that was ereally nice. Good angst, and quite well-written.
Maya-Nee
2007-02-16 . chapter 1
I loved this!
Poor Matt ;__;
Beautiful writing
quaintessentially
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
i love your style of writing! it's beautiful. i read your other stories too, n wat can i say except, you have my love! xD
Taskemus
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Gah, Matt's emotions here are so strong and poignant. ;__;

This is just... guh. I'm being terrible at reviewing but it's only because this was so good! That last line was just amazing... I've reread those last few sentences so many times.

The jumbled thoughts in parentheses are a nice touch, too. I also really like all the references you've got in here.

Um, sorry for spamming your stories, also. I had to click on your profile after that first fic and they are all just as wonderful. *_*
The Fritz
2006-08-27 . chapter 1
Fantastic. I especially liked his inner thoughts. You have a very descriptive, yet readable style. Keep up the good work.
Generally Maz
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
I love the inner thoughts in this
EarnestInBerlin
2006-07-24 . chapter 1
This is good. It's creepy and artisitic in its own simplicity.
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