I've never even PLAYED Warcraft and this was STILL supremely cool! True, I had no idea what you were talking about half the time, but I was still able to understand what was going on. Kudos to your excellent writing!

Excellent story! You did a good job of integrating game elements, and I admit that the head fake (Horde paladin and Alliance shaman) caught me completely off guard.

The ending was good, too, and it could lead to so many different places, I'm excited to see where you'll take it. Can't wait to read more!

Wow! You've got mad writing talent. And I am a big sucker for well-written stories, no matter what fandom. I hardly know anything about WoW other than what I see every time I pass by my husband's PC and see him (still) glued to the 'most addictive game of the year', but I must say you've captured the intensity of the battle(s) very well. Very descriptive and downright philosophical at times. Great job! Keep writing!
Greetings from Dany

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Wow! I really, really enjoyed this story. The details and descriptions of everything, including the battles, made for a very engaging read. I was also very pleasantly surprised to see that it wasn't a typical tauren shaman vs. human paladin story.

Great story, and I hope that you continue with it. I'd love to see this last a few more chapters, if not even more. ;)

Oh, and I wish more writers would write about the draenei and blood elves. The ones I've seen don't seem to write with as much detail or -zest- as you do. You care about the storyline and the lore (whether it's "destroyed" or not; I personally enjoy the new additions), and it makes the story that much more intriguing.