Hi again, bunny!

How cute!
While this isn't a gender bender story (Hahaa), it still is quite clever. You are insane and I love it. I like how the story leaves the reader wondering what will happen next. That's always a nice feeling.

Your matrix reference was very fun. It made me imagine Axel as Morphius (spelling?) and Roxas as Neo..you know where this is going..
Maybe Rude would make a better Morphius though. And Reno could be Neo? ..anyway.

That'd be hot.

Sorry..I'm getting off subject.

I like that you don't go into lengthy descriptions (like you could have went into such a tirade about how Olette was standing across the street and how the light hit her etc.) but at the same time I wish you would have talked more about how he felt when he saw her.

Other than that, I liked everything.

Can I suggest setting your Author's notes apart from the rest of your story by putting them in bold and/or italics and a page break? It just helps set it off from the actual flow of the story.

Well then, Mz.Valentine, I think I'm going to continue my field trip into your stories!
-goodwitch08

This is just awesome. ♥

Something about your style is so great to read. It's not all weighed down by descriptions, nor am I saying that it's plain and simple. It's just really, really nice. And I love that.

"He didn't save the universe either; he was only absorbed into someone who could./Pang./Pang./Pang."

That's probably my favorite part, though the whole piece was wonderful.

Faving. :3

You're darn right that you haven't written anything in a long time. I've been waiting for you to submit something and you finally do a few weeks before my now belated B-Day.

Anyway, this is shorter compared to your other previous one-shots. I can't say that it's really grabbing me and sucking me in, as I like to say. However, it is sweet and short to the point and I think that that's what you tried to accomplish with the audience. I do like this story still though.

Cheers.

You and I need to collab on a Chapter fic...someday.

- TerrisMoon

hm? :3 dedicated to ken, as in moi? how so? x3 never been a fan of this pairing, but alrighty.

you're making me want to write. how could you?

okie dokie, write more, neh? I might just help you.

should reconsider on that legend of zelda cheese and reincarnation thingy. :3

~ken~

wow, that's nice! xD
i like it.
make more! xD xD xD
that was a good one

~ hana

Homigod -glomp-

You're forgiven for
dropping off the radar. xD

It's hundred-ish there?
Lord, I thought we had it
bad, what with it being 40
and all o_O

This was cute. And the
part about Roxas not trusting
his memory made me -snrk-

One thing though.

The fic...repeats itself.
Like, it ends...and then you're
reading it again. Like you typed it
once...then again.

If that made any sense at all,
be proud. That's the first time
I've strung a coherent explanation
together in a while =.=

I can't wait until your
damn computer gets fixed ><
I'm going insane.

-will not sing Mr.Lonley...will not-

I'm so lonely...Mr.Lonely.
I have nobody, to call my own.

o_o -headdesks- SEE?

I pray to god your computer gets fixed
really soon. For my sake and yours.

Love you and miss talking to you ;_;
~ caits