Odo review number 6 (see my review for Nimbus 1944's if confused):

I like the way you used Roman numerals to show a change in the rhythm. My favorite is stanza II - it's told very well, rapid and action-like. There is the issue of Grindelwald being more contemporary, as other reviewers have pointed out, but I can think of several solutions, perhaps the simplest being that it is a different Grindelwald!

what a range of imagination! not just the poem, but the topic itself. ODO d GR8.
let us drink a bottle of butterbeer to his feats and yours too.
CHEERS (Hagrid hiccups)

This tale of yours tells of Odo the Brave!
(I don't think the rhymes are bad).
The wording was great, the yarn so well spun,
and for Odo I felt really sad.

Great job on this song, it gave me great joy,
as I sat here and read it in bed.
Yes, Odo was brave, and Odo was great,
and remembered, though he is dead.

hey, wow, this poem was amazing! i absolutley loved it! awesome job!
do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate it if you did. =D

The rhyming's not bad! Sheesh, I wish I could write poems that rhymed and make sense! I love your original take on it, with Odo being the one who killed Grindelwald! Though the chocolate frog card says different :-) okay ignore me!! I think it's really good!

And as he fell, Odo laughed,
A laugh of joy untouched with pain,
His bloodied face did with pleasure glow
As the heavens let their tears rain.

These are my favourite lines!

no the rhyming is NOT bad! wow this was flippin' AWSOME!! gosh darnit, the II stansa (sp?) makes me wanna see that fight!!

Um, OK - but Odo was supposed to be an historical figure, someone from the far past, whereas Grindelwald is a contemporary of Hagrid and Slughorn's.

Interesting to see Odo appearing in a more contemporary setting (well, in wizarding terms, the Grindelwald era could almost count as contemporary). He's becoming something of a time-travelling hero - popping up whenever a saviour is required to do valorous, chivalrous deeds. Pity he always ends up dying - makes him more of an anti-hero really.
I enjoyed the poem - good to see the story given a different twist by breaking the mould and not quoting JKR's final verse.

HI!! I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner but as you know, I'm out of town and the monitor of the only computer with internet that I had acces to, broke. Anyway, congratulations for your poem. It's good, and don't worry about the rythm. I think it's ok. I can't wait to read your other updates but I don't know when it will happen because right now I have to learn because I have 2 more exams.(I don't feel like learning because it's so hot!!)

Once again, in evil times, a hero must be called,
And Odo has returned again — to battle Grindelwald.
All hail Miranda, number six to carry Odo through!
We fear not; always he returns to fight the dark anew.

Odo the Hero, who was born into tragedy
Stood up to his foe, with a heart full of bravery
A bitter pill to swallow, in this time of strife
For joy, and love and peace to fight, and to give up your life
Currage bring victory, that's a truth so true
And yet an Odo Poet has told his tale anew