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| Gabriel 2006-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice story. I like the ending especially. you said you made one story with a happy ending. Is this it? |
| Mint Pizza Queen 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. Song fits it to a "T". Some typos, but it's excellent. |
| Volatile Boredom 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseHm it's quite interesting...what song is it ? KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK !! ~solitarywarrior |
| Azazel 2006-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's well written. Maybe a few typos, I think only two or three but that doesn't take away from the song or the story. Well done though. I enjoyed it as it played visually in my head. |