Sorry for the delayed review. I just read your last chapter and really enjoyed it. Great Malcolm-Trip moment in the beginning, and... you're not going to leave us hanging like this for long, are you? I like this story!

She is not dead, you can't kill her, I LIKE her.
Bring her back. ALIVE! NOW!

Damn you... I was reading this to cheer meself up!
UPDATE AND BRING HER BACK!!

Nice chapter. We all believed Ela that she didn't want to sleep on the floor because she wouldn't be inconvenienced by Mal, right? And it was just because of the massage that he slept well, I'm sure. *snort* Those two are so amusing. It's just Malcolm's luck that Trip would be passing by when he left in the morning. Once again, you wrote great interactions between the characters. But argh! You can't leave the story like that! Please tell me there's going to be a follow up?!?

Interesting to see that the story is getting a bit angsty. I wonder how Malcolm will solve this problem...

Very funny! Loved the conversation with Phlox, LOL. And that "oh, look, the messhall," was hilarious, I could just picture Mal rushing in to avoid Trip's mocking. Looking forward to more

CONTINUE!

I like this so far. I hope to see more of it soon. One of my favorite characters from Enterprise was Malcom.

enjoying this story very much...Malcolm is my fave character so its good to read a story where he isnt pining after Hoshi!!

Excellent! I wasn't sure if this was going to be a one-shot, but I'm glad to see there's more. I loved the lines "Malcolm thought he was quite capable of sparring one handed, but for some reason the doctor had seemed horrified by the suggestion." and "Malcolm narrowed his eyes, Phlox was in for some harsh field training." Very funny and in character for Malcolm. I love him when he's grouchy and sarcastic. I also liked the lines about neuropressure. Great interactions between Mal and Trip and Mal and Ela. I expect Ela's payment will be very fun to read about. Thanks for the update!

*laughs* Fun story! Though I must admit that sparring to tire yourself out is an insomnia remedy that I haven't tried yet. I loved the bridge scene with Malcolm's naughty language. Very humourous! Thanks for the fic!

Nice fic, thanks. Although I would like to think Malcolm could hold his own easily to any of his crewmembers :>)
So, was he able to sleep better now? (I don't think so...)