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| Musubit 2007-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseThat was very well done! |
| nikki.02 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseW-o-o-o-o-w! One of the best Danny and Lindsay oneshots I've read on the site! |
| CryHope 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really beautiful. I like the descriptive flow of this story. Well done. =D bo- |
| Phyxsius 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely breathtaking! Beautifully written! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! Loved this... WOW! JENNIFER |
| ReJo 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseYou conveyed their 'dance' very well. |
| josie hardy 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abusewow... how did you not use dialogue? I can never resist. Really well written and romantic, that is the best way I've ever heard a kiss described... and their subtle hints were so cute :D btw, I checked out that site you told me about, looks cool. Thanx josie hardy |
| Moriel21 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseCyko...how I have missed you! Lol...this was beautiful! I love how you did it with only "him/her...he/she" and no names, it really worked well for this story! I love how you write hon, seriously you are so amazingly talented! This was a beautiful story...loved it! You should write more:) |
| oddie33325 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abusePERFECT I LOVED IT MORE PLEASE |
| artigiano 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abusegreat oneshot. pure and simple fluff, and i love it! |
| Shortcake82 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseReally, really good. I loved it so much. Is that it or will there be more? |
| supercsi4 2006-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWESOME STORY! LOVED IT! |
| wjobsessed 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully-written. (JMHO)I would like to see you do a sequel to this moment...do they find their walk going to his or her apartment? What then? |
| LadeeBear 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuse*melts into a puddle of goo* Holy crud, you are AMAZING. And to think that you used no dialogue in there whatsoever. It was brilliant, for various reasons: vocabulary, no spelling/grammatical errors, PERFECT depiction of DL, beautiful ending. You are wonderful, and I am glad that I got to read something else of yours! Keep up the wonderful work. (I would like to see you write some more) Jenn |
| TakeDown2 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI liked how you wrote this with the he and she. Good story :). |