I'm really, really enjoying this story, especially watching how Naruto and Tayuya's personalities bounce off each other.

I hope you're still meaning to update it some time. :)

just read your profile note, sad but at least you came out with it not many authors who stop on their fics actually say they stopped, so thats great. it will be missed

Hey nice story i really like tayuya by the way the plot is good and well i think its not enough please please update it soon i like to read a new chapter

Interesting... Sakon wears make up... very interesting...

I really like this. Has it been discontinued. The best line: " I might not be the best ninja in the village, but at least nothing I've ever done will keep me up at night screaming at my dreams."

good stuff. i like it. i hope to see more soon.

you write her well, they'd be veru good together

PLEASE DONT TO THE KUKUKUK its hebi pedophiles laugh and we dont need reminders of hsi faggoty ass

nice work. hope for an other chapter soon

Hey, this is the best Naruto/Tayuya story I have found so far... so please update soon... especially cause you left us hanging with both the flute and Tayuya's sad thoughts. :)

the ending where Naruto and her had a small falling out was not fun to read, but the rest of it was! it's just a shame that he didn't give her the gift or that she is so lonely. excellent detail and storyline-wise. it has a good plot. keep writing! I like all of your Naruto stories so far.

Wow, you have caught Tayuya's personalty very well. Those two would interact like that with each other. Naruto/Tayuya fics are so hard to find so please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.

more please

Please pick this story back up - it's one of the best NaruTayu stories I've read and there is something of a shortage of them.

I can't wait to read chapter 6 if there is one. Tayuya is my favorite character and IMO, Naruto/Tayuya make a great couple! Thanks SO much for writing.