i LOVE this story, its one of my favorites. but, i just realized one minutes Heero's words are all slurred, the next they arent. and if he was getting worst wouldnt they stay slurred?

Oh well, i STILL LOVE THIS and its STILL one of my FAVORITES!

heh heh

beautiful and sad.

great writing. Keep up the great work.

Oh my gosh, my heart was beating so fast. I loved the fact that it was in Heero's POV... Definitely couldn't stop reading until I was at the end. Geez, I don't even know how to describe what I was feeling while reading it. Great job at keeping my emotions flying.

When i see the warning: deathfic! i using immediatally X out of the fic. but, considering i just wrote a rather depressing death fic about GW (called Identity if ur interested) i apted to take a chance. this was powerful. that is the best word to describe it. it wasn't oh so far out there like to many other fics are, and i think you got most of the characters down. heero was a little off, but that's to be expected considering the pills and such, that and, i have never read a fic where Heero was perfectly depicted. i think it's impossible (though this was close.) i loved the detail/description you put into this. it looks like it took a lot of time.

nice job i liked ur poem...very deep.

-shadylady6

*cries* my god that is a really touching story! you are an amazing writer! i just love this story! great job! soo sad! *runs off to get a tissue*