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LeosWiccanAngel
2008-04-06
ch 61,
abuseOhh... please.. please...please... say you are going to finish this?... This is the second time I've read this in a years time, totally forgetting it wasn't complete...

You have a lot of passion in your writing... keep up the great work...
Corazon
2008-02-13
ch 61, anon.
abuseHey!
You didn't forget about this story, did you? That would be really sad. :-(
You have so much talent.
Corazon90
2007-11-20
ch 61,
abuseI like the new chapter, though it's more than sad to hear that Sam's getting worse. I really hope she's going to get better soon.
lizardmomma
2007-11-15
ch 61,
abusegood job, I am sad to see that Sam's health has gotten worse
lizardmomma
2007-10-30
ch 60,
abuseVERY GOD JOB
WhitelighterLeo21
2007-10-28
ch 60,
abusegood chapter update soon!
Corazon90
2007-10-28
ch 60,
abuseGreat to read a new chapter. I loved it. I love how everything seems to be the way it should be. But I can't shake off the feeling something bad is going to happen again... Hope, I'm wrong.
I wonder what happened on that day, three weeks ago.
I hope to read more soon.
xheart to thee
2007-10-12
ch 58,
abuseI know, my review is WEEKS late. Je suis desole. (I so do not think I spelt that right...oh well.) Anywho, I liked this chapter. I love Meddie. She's such a cutie. Her little fashion show was precious. Bless her. All little girls do it. The argument between Mel and Jake was interesting. Naturally Jake was curious and it was only natural that Melinda would be quite defensive of her previous situation. I am glad, however, that they made up, as unwilling as they were! Off to read and review the next chapter!
PiperandLeoFan101
2007-10-04
ch 59,
abusei'm starting to get the feeling that Sam's going to die and i'm not liking it. I really hope that she doesn't! Is anything i would prefer Mel dying over her. I love Sam! She's my favorite of all of the children. updat soon
Corazon90
2007-10-04
ch 59,
abuseHey! This is a great new chapter! First of all I have to repeat what I wrote in my last review: Meddie so soo cute!^^ I really love her with Piper.
I'm glad that Jake finally really opened up to Leo. It was about time. ;-)
I love their big patchwork family and I really hope they get to live a kinda carefree life from now on.(at least for some time) They all deserve it.
lizardmomma
2007-10-04
ch 59,
abusevery good
Corazon90
2007-09-14
ch 58,
abuseGreat chapter. The argument between the kids is very realistic. Something like that was bound to happen sometime.
I really get to like Jake. I don't know why exactly because he really is a kind of difficult child (which is understandable, of course). And Meddie is so very, very cute!
I'm looking forward to more family bonding! ;-)
PiperandLeoFan101
2007-09-13
ch 58,
abusei have a feeling that it will be a while before Jake accepts Piper and the fact that Leo's with the Mel and Sam more then him. Meddie seems to be accepting it though! update soon
WhitelighterLeo21
2007-09-13
ch 58,
abusegood chapter. update soon
lizardmomma
2007-09-13
ch 58,
abusegood job, a blow up between the kids was bound to happen and I think you did a good job with it
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