 Philipa Aleshre 7/24/06 . chapter 1Hi there! It's good to see new Claire/John fics, I totally love them! D And I think this story is good, even though it's just the first chapter.
How did John know where Claire lives? It's just that at first he didn't know the way to her house and then he suddenly appears there. I know it isn't an important fact in the story but that just kept in my mind. I liked that they're like... going slow? don't know, it's just that in some fics i have read john meets claire and immediatly he starts telling her all about his house problems and stuff, and here he just didn't want, so i think this is more like real Bender, who would have a hard time deciding whether telling Claire all the truth or not... i think he has trust problems, it's difficult for him to trust in anybody, he also has troubles trusting himself. Oh, John is such a big character with so many points of view and stuff.
But anyway, I'll keep round here watching you
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