So sad yet I want to read more! Please update!

very depressing, but depressings good ^^

great story! update soon ^^

great story the only tink i dodnt like was shizune's death and short chapts

U_U T-T I feel so sorry for the girl... and my Kabuto
*sniff sniff cry sob* I love tragic stuff like that!

i think i can guess who the papa is, i think, i hope at least...

It took me so long to get to reading this! So much school work... Nice chapter!

Very good chapter. Very sad for them all.
Kabuto did the right thing in letting Tsunade take Moroyke for now.

I cant wait to see Kabuto own that evil punk!


Nice job! ^^

Awn that part where Shizune died, made me cry :'( seriously.. I love this fic though keep up the good work

Hey Deanna that was really biased. You think that since one little thing happened that you didn't like you'll never like any of my writings at all and personally I don't care because you don't even have a user so you have no place to talk. If you can't take stuff thats happens in my stories I think you should suck it up alittle more, its just a story, no body really died and you're really dumb for saying such words. Like said Critics and harsh words like that only amke me wish people in this world had more sense so I say, think before you act and if you don't like the story DON'T REVIEW. I still look good cause I got another review so thanks ^^

Ooh My Gosh! Poor Shizune! ToT Kabuto will kill him, right? RIGHT?! o-O

This story sucks. How could she die! Im never reading your stories again. It was stupid how she died.

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Shizune...dies? NO! >_< As sad as it is, I can't wait to read the next chapter...

It sounds reasonable how Shizune died. It was a huge surprise. I had to read that last part twice because I coulnd't believe it. I hope you update soon!

=DD Nice Fanfic Keep up the good work