Wow, you've just made me be very proud of Ana)) and I like that - I really think she's the only woman in POTC series that can be admired!
just a pity it's a oneshot..

A great story. Very good.

aw so cute! luved it. very true to their characters. It was beautiful. loved it. great job.

Woah, fiesty. Sizzlin. I think you captured them both perfectly in this piece. Once again I've come across a new favorite!

I wish I weren't too busy reading to stop and point out my favorite parts as I go. Let's see, I liked the part where Jack first is staring at the red part on her shirt and she slaps him, haha, and then he's like "lift up your shirt", and she's all like What the Hell?

Okay, maybe not those exact words. And then after all that debating and pain and etc. etc., they kiss! Beautiful!

This conversation is definitely not over, yet. Favorite line.

-Katie

i loved it! great job!! keep up the good work!

Oh that Ana, she's just too stubborn for her own good. And Jack rightly needs to show her just how much she's respected.
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Glad you managed to work in a slap - I honestly don't think a story is completely without at least one slap from Ana.
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Great work and I personally think this one needs a sequel, absolutely.

Wow, this is the first Ana/JAck story I've seen. I love it! Are you going to write a sequel? Good job.

I don't mind that there wasn't a point cause the quality definately made up for it. It was awesome.

neat story! looking forward to an update. by the way, at the end of the chapter in the second to last paragraph you spelled barely as "barley." just letting you know. anyways, update soon!

Cool!

I really liked it good job!

That was GREAT! I'm so speechless, I don't know what to say! I...I...I... O.O

You freaking genius.

Luv,
*~jackNanamaria~*

P.S. This was...was...FANTASTIC! And Ana was so in character, as was Jack's. BRILLIANT! O.O