It was a good story, however, Ka Lae or "South Point" on The Big Island of Hawai'i is the MOST southern point of the United States. Key West has the southernmost point in the "CONTINENTAL" U.S.A. I'm sure Hoshi and Trip would have known this.

Very nice

Aw...just wonderful! Inspite of the disasterous ENT finale, fics like this serve as constant reminders as to why I love Trip and Hoshi and their would-be relationship so much. They would have worked so much better together, rather than all that Trip/T'Pol nonsense. :(

Thanks so much for writing and sharing. I look forward to seeing more fics from you! :)

~Shaliza

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"Live well, laugh often, love much!"

Very Nicely done.I hope you writemore enterprise. I personally liked the show. I am an archer /t'pol fan myself though my last work was written to go in a trip/tpol sight hence the pairing so not to bug anyone there. While it was primarily Soval and Amanda the other pairing in this case did not bother me as it was secondary. Logical Lifemates is now completed and on the boards here. I loved this story and look forward to reading more from you.

Lisa

A sweet story. Thanks!

Hmm, cute story but you really needed to do something about the bond between Trip & T'Pol.

And yes after reading htis I did go skim your "A meeting in Solitude", you don't deal with the bond there either.

I know many folks would like to ignore it and that's fine but they either have to spell it out in the intro or have the story deal with it.

Since you are doing an AU anyways you could just say that the bond never happen and that otherwise many of the events occured as in the series but that Koss never released T'Pol and the white room stuff didn't happen, indeed you could say the events of 3rd season where Trip and T'Pol had sex were seen by both as a big mistake and Trip never when to Vulcan with T'Pol. And so on and so forth.

Anyways nice story, but for real fun you could have the Mind meld T'Pol did with Hoshi with its aftermath (dreams about Trip) being the cause of Hoshi seeing him in a new light and deciding to go after him. Than have T'Pol never having talked to him about it and after the Terra Prime incident she could have rejected comfort from Trip and gone to Vulcan to get help ridding herself of unwanted emotions.

So here would be a Trip with no hope of anything with T'Pol, knowing where she has gone and why and than Hoshi seeks him out.

You could have great fun with Trip and Hoshi dancing around each other, dealing with how real their feelings are?

Is Trip on the Rebound?
Is Hoshi feeling T'Pol's feelings?

Confesions, doubts, reunions, and so forth.

Patrick