HAHAHA. Totally cracked me up. Poor Mikan and her bad grammar, but it's actually cool, for being too funny. XD
And the perspiration-thingy did give me much more to laugh at. Natsume's so sweet, I definitely love that, though he's still being too cold. More like a popsicle to me.

Hotaru being Hotaru. Enough said. HAHAHA

-N.H.-

I love one-shots,this is sooo funny and amazing!P.S Mikan meant inspiration,didn't she*giggles*!

HAHAHA! THAT ENDING! You captured their personalities perfectly! xDDDDDDDDDD *dies from laughter*

Haha! How cute! :D

PLEASE add more chapters to this fanfic! It's amazing and I'm dying to read more!

Funny...hehe...:D

haha the last part is funny loved it 3

Hihihiiii. You restored my addiction to GAFics. I've been to engrossed at reading Sakura(haruno)-centered fanfics. Thank you, master! I am still your loyal minion! I can't wait for the update of Hotaru's sleep over to come!

After the written story of Mikan, everything became bold. Erm... referring to the font. _

"Look on the bright side Mikan!" he conjured up his jolliest of tones. "At least they're cleaning the floor for you. You won't have a hard time in your cleaning duties later!"

HAHAHA! What a brighter side, Yuu! X3

"Ask help anytime you like. I don't mind…" he said, almost in a whisper. "…if it's you. Just keep that stupid smile on your face."

CHEESY LINE ALERT! Although it's sweet. But I still can't imagine him actually saying that. Maybe in mind, yes, but through his mouth...

You are my perspiration!

:))) WHAT THE? Perspiration, eh?

"Zip it for one thousand rabbits."

Hotaru grinned. "Deal."

I love how these two can still "get along well". XD sorry, Natsume X Hotaru fan here!

Anyway, because I'm not really a good critique, I'll just say what on my mind is.

This is a really cute story! I never thought that she'll use "Prince Rabbit" as a name. XD I thought that it'd be something that symbolizes Natsume. Anyway, nice way of showing her grammar. :3

OH KAMI-SAMA! I cracked up at the end!

You have made my day! Err... Night. ;)

Fabulous story! LOL I... can't... stop... LAUGHING!

...sooo CUTE SEQUEL PLEASE? it crACKED ME up GOOD HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHA! ROFLOL gossssh! this is just so FUNNY! Natsume is Mikan's Perspiration! now i knoww rofl XD you really don't fail on making me LOL at your pieces ))) this is just so good! Natsume's the savior! because of that, I LOVE him more than ever! hahaha. then OMGee HE burst out, laughed out loud and spoken out loud 'CUTE' then Hotaru witnessing it! haha! BINGO natsume! lol at the end, dealing with Hotaru for a thousand rabbits and not before claiming it as a 'Laughing Gas' whooot! hahaha)))) *can't breath! rofl*

lol nice story :) it took me a while to figure out black c .. lol -had a miken moment- :)

Awww it's fluffy xD

natsume is kinda occ but still a cute story.

And this kinda helps me or inspires me to continue my own fanfics. Someone out there will read my story and like it. Even if it's just one reader. Thanks

Laughing gas:D

funny - so damn hilarious XD

YOU have made my day :)

lol keep writing :O