THIS CHAPTER IS REALLY SMALL, BUT IT HAS A LOT OF INFORMATION AN DETAIL PUT IN TO IT:)

SWEET STORY. I LIKE HOW IT STARTS:)

WOW THE YEAR 2205. THAT'S ALONG WAY FROM NOW:)

Very nice. I can't believe someone hasn't reviewed yet o_0
Yeah, I like how you get in depth with the pokemon's conditions here. This chapter has really caught my attention. I'm going to read and review the rest right now!