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eektruffle
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
I really liked this addition to DLS. I guess for me, it's all about the story and angst between Kara and Lee. This definitely held a lot of angst. Definitely, you are superb at writing in Kara's voice. Her thought process, inner turmoil, actions, it's all so believable. I love how you torment them throughout the night. The scene between them after dinner totally fills up my angst tank. Woohoo!

One question I do have is, why do you use "Thrace" for when Lee talks to Kara? Why not use Kara? Is it to emphasize that he doesn't want to acknowledge her marriage to Sam? That just seemed a little weird to me.
Hell-of-Fire
2006-11-23 . chapter 1
uhh, great! I love it! all this tension and hottness! *squee* keep it coming, will you? :)
annpo
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
Oh the sweet torture of it all.

Would love to read one where it's Kara in control...hint hint :):);)
scullymulder
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
Uhm..I'm going to make a bad pun, here and say that was damn delicious. I love this series...

Wonderful job.
stardust2002
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
This is more like the Lee and Kara we know. Of course, they're not actually having an affair on the show (or are they?) but the tension that is so them is there.

I'd love to see what happens ... does she meet him later? Does she leave Sam? So many unanswered questions.
Mariel3
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
Beautifully written!
L
2006-07-24 . chapter 1
More please!
starbuckjade
2006-07-24 . chapter 1
Please please please tell me that you are going to write about Lee and Kara's meeting later on that night. Late night rendezvous at the cabin...so hot.

Great series, please keep it going!
JAT.NJ
2006-07-24 . chapter 1
Holy cow, you've had a busy day.
I thoroughly enjoy the dirtly little secret snippets.
I'm loving Alpha Lee.

Thanks for this.
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