great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Where's Wulf and Dani? Cujo too. Dani could be adopted by the Fentons. Danny hasn't even realized he somehow befriended Fright Knight and I think Walker. Heh. Brandon aka Box Ghost and Vlad should remain his friends. I think Danny should befriend Ember, Skulker, and Technus. After all Danny was stressed. Pariah does not seem evil just strict.

Hehe. Loved how Walker's OOC.

Ok, less confusing! Awesome! This is getting better and better!

Hey, that was a pretty quick update! Sweet!

So, is the sibling rivalry the only thing that needs to be settled now? I can't remember.

Ah, Ember's so close to getting her memories! Can't wait to see what happens when she gets them back. ^_^ Will Technus be heartbroken?

Great chapter!

-UR :-)

Ok, still confused, but it's great! So cool! So funny!

cool chappie. i dont mind bout the background history tho, i'm really into ancient egypt; i wanted to be an egypttologist one day, but i'm more or less leaning towards something else, i forgot wat it was tho, but it's something totally different. o yea, now i remember, it was computer graphic designer. hehe, :P. i wonder if Danny's gonna fall asleep or if he's gonna stay awake to find that pa-sheri reached him. hmm...


thx,
brittney

Yeah, thanks to you my perception of Clockwork is completely ruined. >.< But I love it.

Awe, I can't wait to see what the letter is! Glad one demension/timeline is okay. -_-; This will be significantly less confusing now.

Ha! Another evil sibling! How ever did Pariah keep those three under control...

Another great chapter.

-UR :-) ... MAN SKIRT!

Oee, I want to read more! How dare you to use a cliff-hanger!! So... you're going to write all day...? Cool^^ I'm so bored today xD I don't have much updates except when it's from you ;.; So write!! NOW!! Mwahahahahaha!!

Lol

"GHOSTS!"

"SHUT UP!"

They should really say it in the series once... Anyway... great story^-^ To bad for your birthday though =( maybe you should move it to next week or something like that. Then you won't get sick!!

Ok, slightly less confusing than the last chapter, but still confusing. Oh, well, I"m sure I'll figure it out eventually!

Snickerdoodles and Milwalkee?

Well, I'm glad you posted! I was very excited to see it!

Clockwork still makes me giggle. And to see that he and Jack think alike makes it all the more great. :-)

Dan and the twinkie was great. Love it. And he puts himself back in the thermos. All the more addition to his greatness!

Ah, the ghost kids are getting so close to their ages! Hopefully they get this adventure over with before they get their memories back. I can see that causing trouble in the future...

It may be short, but I'm glad for something! It was awesome!

-Unrealistic :-)

continue asap!:) ;)

Aww! So funny and so CUTE! This promises to be good!

cool yet cofusing *gata reread it* any way continue asap!:) ;)