omg so cute! i wish you could continue! wait you can.! Goten is just the cutest little thing isnt he? i loved it!

good story I am really sorry if I offended you on my reviews for your calvin and Hobbes story I hope you're not to mad at me

good u should be proud of your work

I like it. Maybe you should do a sequel?

Good work, good work. very short, but to the point of Goten's sadness. So, he didn't know Goku was dead? What have they been telling him for all these year? :) I like your writing style and I don't think I saw even one spelling error, good work! Trunks and Goten have a strong friendship and you showed it well. I think a lot of readers like longer stories, but this was a cute little tid bit and I must say, good job.