...wow...just wow... hide me...

Good stuff. Job well done.

Hahahaha -collapses into a gale of laughter- Humor to the max, I must say. L'Arachel never fails to amuse me, that's for sure.

Thumbs up for the crack pairing, there definitely needs to be more of a variaty in this fandom.

Rather humorous and cute. Great work.

Holy crap, this is awesome! You also seem to have a rather...interesting way of useing imagery, lol.

It was a good story...poor Knoll...he starts with 0 luck, but that seems to increase in this story... Still, L'Arachel freaks me out...she should be a bit...calmer

*snigger* Yes. Crack pairings FTW. It's really hard to get Knoll's character at all, though, so I think you did a good job of portraying it. L'Arachel was no different-her characterization was just fine.

Wish I had more to say about this, but it wasn't that long anyway. Nice work.

Knoll... Fainting. XD

How cute! ^_^

Crack-shots for the win! That was HILARIOUS. Knoll never gets to do anything fun. Even if he is utterly pwned by Ewan, he deserves a little time in the spotlight too!

Like I said, fun fic, I laughed more often during it than I have from many other fics. Quite enjoyable on a whole.

Nice stuff,
Rex

Yay! I loved the beginning! I heard you had some trouble writing it though...MAN!! I wanna post mine so bad now, I'm the last of the three of us...but certain "conditions" prevent me from doing so...-_- Just ask Steve if you're curious.

Anyways, great story, everyone was in perfect characterization and I found the whole thing amusing! I love L'Arachel. I noticed you changed the ending a little. Not sure if I prefer it more, but it certainly does fit better. So yeah, lovely read as always. I love your writing style.

Bwahaha! Well done! When first we think of crack pairings.. we think of VaidaXLucius... but THEN we think of KnollXL'Arachel... I think.

Anyway!

Very clever use of humor. Even though humor is not supposed to be a main genre, only once I think did humor actually play a part in the story itself. The rest of it was just... flavor text, shall we say. I really liked the random stuff that popped up in the flavor text ^_^

...wildebeest? o.o'

Oh that sneaky Dozla and his ways of faking-sleep. I bet he had the whole shifty-eyes thing goin' on.

I'd say that Knoll was out of character but then I wouldn't know what I was tlaking about. True, he was OOC, but it's easy to see why he would be so different around L'Arachel, so this is fine. Further to your credit, in the beginning, his characterization was near perfect. Well done with him.

On the other hand, L'Arachel was absolutely perfect. I'm normally not a fan of her but you brought out many qualities of her that, if nothing else, made me chuckle a bit. Excellent job on her!

Well, I suppose that's all I have for now. Again, great job, and here's hoping you'll try another crack pairing in the near future ^_^ ~Steve

this is such an awesome fic. XD your metaphors and similes had me laughing out loud. i absolutely love how l'arachel forcibly pulls knoll out of his emo gutter and into...whatever crazy world she keeps bouncing around in. it's great.

all in all, i consider this to be one of the most entertaining stories in the fire emblem section. i might consider entering the contest, but i've no crack pairing ideas as of yet and vaida/lucius hurts my brain. well, i'll try to think of something. :D

thank you for a most amusing read!

Wow. That was excellent.

I enjoyed it, especially the emo and wildebeast lines. So well written, and the title not onlyhas symbolic meaning, but helps to embrace the fic's hilarity. I think this is extremely awesome.

You are amazing.