Awesome, LMAO.
I totally agree with the moral of this story and it was a very funny read. ^_^

The really funny thing was, I thought that as a mock fic I was going to see the real Mary Sue deal. I was reading the piece going, why is this girl written like a real character... the irony! I have never seen someone write a story telling what you should do, and that was refreshing.

Heh funny idea and even better mocking of a totaly horrible kind of fic, nice job and keep up the good work at making flaws in others stories even more apparent

PLEASE I LOVE IT PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE SOON THANKS!

Lol, weird but funny ^_^ and I understand your author's note lol. Mary-sues like that will surely suck and get flamed lol.

ok all u need to do know is contenue it!

Thou hast spoken the truth.

Well, the moral IS an important fact. :P That was funny...

thank-u for gracing us with your smarts!(no...seriously)...my "sasuke sister oc" that im writing happens to be a very talented ninja...and does not where silk kimonos and also wants to avenge the clan!i swear to u shes not end up with naruto and has a bad-ass attitude in every way!have u seriously read stories like that? "wow" is right!sheesh!thank-u...and funny story by the way!

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Even though i was born and practically raised in the ghetto i have to say this...MEGA SQUEE!

i agreetotally.its no fun without flaws or angry people...but some people may be stronger than sakura coz shes only good at medical nothing else.

lol nice. Man do you like to speak your mind. And I thought I was the honest bitch. Oh well YOU RULE ANYWAY! Bye for now.

damn right

There they saw a girl just a smidge younger then they were. She had long, shiny black locks when beads and jewels cascading down across them, framing a clean face with porcelain skin. She had tiny, fragile hands with shiny fingernails and… Oh wait, scratch all that out. Her shiny hair was really just covered in shiny dust. Her face wasn’t clean and porcelain, more like tanned and burned, with splotches of dirt all over. Her hands were tiny, but they were rugged, dirt covered and her nails were chipped.

And as for those beads and jewels, they were actually beetles…

…Well, they HOPED they were beetles.

Haha! This is just pure genius. When you got to the "scratch all that out" part, I could have sworn I heard a record scratch in the background. This is helpful and if I ever want to try and make a good OC, I'll use this for sure.

Yay! Somebody DOES care!! Thank you for writing this fic. Your an inspiritaion for all Mary-sue offender in the whole world!!

You are so right! I laughed, then I agreed! Yay for you.Oh, btw, thanks for an awesome mary-sue parody.

~lilchibihina