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Autumn'sCherryBlossom
2007-05-24 . chapter 1
that was so awesome! Good song choice too. :)
dark Alley
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
yea, he may have been a little bit oc, but i mean the man has got to change eventually!
Sam
2006-11-05 . chapter 1
Very sad! D: Why did so many people had to die? *cries*
it'sSAOVADY
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
Omg. I loved it. I started crying. It was so sad and yet cute. I couldn't Tsunade died and a whole lot of other cool people. =), =(
XxMadara's-Little-StalkerxX
2006-10-17 . chapter 1
aw so cute!
hanyou-samurai
2006-08-02 . chapter 1
ah, that was SO good! it was really sad though!
Ayi
2006-07-27 . chapter 1
Ok so if one were to refer to the present Sasuke, yea that would be OOC, but who's to say that maybe in the future Sasuke might have received some sensitivity lessons and whatnot?
Sasuke: *glares*
Naruto: *sniggers*
Me: *doesn't notice* And who's not to say he won't be such an iceblock of a bastard either and will actually open up?
Sasuke: *activates the Sharingan*
Naruto: *starts laughing his ** off*
Me: *goes on* And who's not to say that he'll finally confess that he's in lo-
Sasuke: Sure hope your parents have your grave ready *charges up Chidori*
Me: EEP... O_O
Sasuke: *Charges at her*
Me: *ducks behind Kakashi who's reading his book* Hmm?
Sasuke: *can't stop in time so he ends up toasting the Icha Icha Paradise*
Me: *peeks out and eyes widen* Oh shat...
Naruto: *jaw drops* Ooh...Teme's in for it now...
Kakashi:*eye widen* M-my..I didn't even... * lowers his head; in a low voice* Sasuke...
Sasuke: *gulps*
Kakashi: WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU ABOUT USING THE CHIDORI?! *creates the Raikiri and starts chasing after Sasuke with an intent to kill*
Sasuke: *runs away like there's no tomorrow*
Naruto: *resumes laughing his ** off*
Me: *coughs* Anyhoo I thought your story was pretty good. So keep on with the updates!

~Ja ne

Ayi
Artimes Athene
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
i may have not liked certain parts of this story but it was still a goos story keep up the good work
Jennjennr
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
Hmm I really liked this, it was sad and szweet all at the same time, I wish it was a little longer... but I still like it anyway... in fact I like itt enough for me to put it in my favorites... :D Congrats... and thanks for writing.
luv hate it
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
you made kakashi and anko...?? that evil... omg! and jiraiya?? there is no more pervertedness in konoha... it is the end of the world! ino... choji?? who is going to make everyone eat BBQ now?? this is so sad... i mean... now who will asuma marry? kurenai is... who will be with genma? shizuni is ...! ai! now my key board is wet. tsunade-sama... no! i feel sad now... but anyways... good work... oh and what hppend t itachi?... byby~yu~
kerrance
2006-07-26 . chapter 1
well, i was close to tears more than twice, which normally means it was very good. i loved it. sasuke was ridiculously ooc, but i can get over it.

*adds to favourites*
hello-lynnie
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
Whoa, a baby. And that's sad, Tsunade died*tears*
Momo-chan X3
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
that is so(etc.) C.O.O.T!(ETC.)
naash
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
wow..i love the storyline...the angst was amazing...i didn't expect an ending like tat anyhow even though there are many fics who choose to end it like that but still you managed to syurprise me..so oit was definitely brilliant...good job...i wanted to know w aht heppened to tenten but oh weell. i can't have everything now can i.
Ryouki's Slave
2006-07-25 . chapter 1
Oh wow this story was amazing! You did a wonderful job making it a songfic considering in most it just seems to be the song and little story. I also liked how you gradually introduces subject like Sakura being married and pregnant etc,. so that the story flows. You know given the circumstances, I don't think Sasuke was too OOC. Everyone emphasizes that he's an unemotional stone, but there must be more depth to that. This was such a beautiful bittersweet story. I hope you write more soon!
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